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8-Apr-03/8:22 AM |
shit, settle. why didn't you tell me i had a sex change?
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| Re: The sky is falling by INTRANSIT |
8-Apr-03/8:30 AM |
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| Re: Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8 |
8-Apr-03/8:43 AM |
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| Re: Phalus by Bobjim the II |
8-Apr-03/12:53 PM |
this measures about 2X life size on my screen--about 4 1/2 inches in length.
trash it, bj.
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| Re: Poemwanker is a bad bitch by Bobjim the II |
8-Apr-03/12:53 PM |
what? do you really really want a sore red one and little orange wings?
poof!
you got em.
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| Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus |
8-Apr-03/1:49 PM |
she wanted soft shells
for him, oreganato--
a fingerbowl, please!!
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| Re: Hunting for a vessel by Nice guy |
8-Apr-03/5:22 PM |
this one's awkward:
Is there adequate oil
to supply the lanterns?
too many questions; yes must be the answer.
why must you always have it your way?
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| Re: yo by bxjay170 |
9-Apr-03/12:42 PM |
bx--it's too bad you don't care. you express thoughts that so many are feeling, but you don't care enough about saying it to communicate it well. if you want some recognition, run spell check. it shows no respect for yourself or your audience to be so sloppy.
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| Re: Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
9-Apr-03/12:43 PM |
less-than-silent lucidity. you just can't be stopped.
got an mp3 of this one yet?
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9-Apr-03/12:47 PM |
you tried this at home, didn't you? with out adult supervision? and you weren't a professional on a closed course, now were you?
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| Re: Anouk by daniella |
9-Apr-03/1:12 PM |
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d--this is a gentle and humble lovesong, if ever i read one. thanks for posting it here.
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| Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig |
10-Apr-03/8:20 AM |
pig,
what do you want from me? editor's comments, or a woman's comments? or both? rsvp, z
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| Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
23-Apr-03/7:02 AM |
my my my. someone has been doing their homework.
this rocks.
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23-Apr-03/7:06 AM |
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23-Apr-03/7:08 AM |
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this poems bites hard: the lion's tooth loosed in too-warm air.
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23-Apr-03/11:30 PM |
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24-Apr-03/7:10 AM |
there are so many things i like about this:
that the betrayal is necessary.
that death pales in comparison to the damage here done.
the cruelty in S2. and the humor.
the violent hand and needy tongue.
dark eye. thumbed rules.
riding to the hills, to run, instead of running to the hills, to hide.
that THE dog is not "my" dog.
the enormity of geography.
the only weak spot i see is this:
"But somehow, somehow
They are not enough."
you are rationalizing here. so i will deduct one point, lest the gods think it perfect.
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| Re: Before The Miscarriage. by scitz |
24-Apr-03/7:35 AM |
fuck all.
now, critically speaking, eliminate the rhymes. they cheapen it.
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| Re: I am a dream by mozac |
24-Apr-03/7:40 AM |
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24-Apr-03/7:42 AM |
overload.
i will not be assimilated.
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