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yo (Free verse) by bxjay170
My soul's flying with the wind looking for a place to lay
am waking up and still seeing the same day
life's getting hard should i go or stay?
do you understand what am trying to say?
My neighborhood is full with cracks
yet no roses grow from them
Looking to exit this life and into the real world
Am here sittin in a high school class room
and i dont even know why am here
wish i could disapier
show no fear
my life has musical sounds but can u hear
If u where am from this u will know and feel
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12128
Posted: April 9, 2003 9:55 AM PDT; Last modified: April 9, 2003 9:55 AM PDT
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Aside from that I love this but I would like to see more. Redraft it if you will, and I'll have another look. I think it's worth a seven. I'm in that kind of mood.