Re: beat myself with a stick by sir_heff	22-Apr-03/8:53 AM
Hey dude, can't say i like most of your stuff but this one appeals to me. I feel i could elaborate for hours around the second section. A few grammar and spelling corrections and i would love it.
Re: Life's Loves Lost by Jigg	23-Apr-03/6:46 AM
Great poem. It's quite vague in some parts, then again it's hard to be specific on such a topic. I feel can really relate to lines 13 and on.
Re: god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff	23-Apr-03/7:22 AM
As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.
Re: hide by sir_heff	24-Apr-03/7:12 AM
I like the theme. BTW hurst = hearse. Only reason for semi-low score was that im not too big a fan of the "every-line-ryhmes-with-the-next" format.
Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	26-Apr-03/6:54 PM
I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!
Re: Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna	27-May-03/7:17 AM
I love it! Okay, i might be a little biased just because of my little rose 'problem.' I think the rose can be used in so many ways to convey emotions like the rejuvination in your poem. I also like the simple rhyme scheme. It's beautiful!
regarding some deleted poem...	27-May-03/7:20 AM
ummm what!? and why?
regarding some deleted poem...	27-May-03/7:24 AM
i wont vote for tihs becuase i dont want it to be immortalized in the worst poems (poem.. yeah right) area. why dont you let everyone else get back to recharging their creative 'batteries' and post when you have something worth expressing.
Re: Tears Of The Rose by kassanna	28-May-03/7:37 AM
OMG I love it! I hope you don't mind if I put this in my little book of 'keepers.' I'll be reading more of your work. :)
Re: Lonely Soul by sir_heff	30-May-03/12:06 PM
okay, cuz im yur friend and all, i have to point out little things. there are a few bumps in the proverbial road of this poem. when they are smoothed it makes it easier for people to read and know what youre saying. the bumps include instances where ryhmes or lengths dont match up well (lines 1 and 8 maybe). and in certain areas you cease to use the pattern used throughout the rest of the poem (3rd stanza) but this IS free verse and you very well may have wanted it that way so maybe i shouldnt say anything. NEwho, i feel the idea behind it(though it may be a tad depressing). 8 on principal :)
Re: Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	30-May-03/3:19 PM
ooo hmmm yum.
Re: The first time in forever by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Jul-03/11:59 AM
Thank you.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Dec-03/10:26 AM
interesting. you managed to muster enough creativity to get a few laughs out of the more immature users of the site, all by just changing two of my lines. i have little problem with you polluting the listings with your own crap, so just keep to that. and maybe credit me if you're crude enough to brutalize another one of my poems.
Re: !!! by Jezabele-In-Hell	13-Oct-04/9:52 PM
The style of this poem is such that I enjoy reading and often write myself. I vote 9 not because it is imperfect in structure, which I believe only adds to it's effect and value, but because I would not dare give it the extremest approval untill I have seen more of your works and had a chance to compare thier worth. Furthermore, knowing you personally as I do, I am left curious and somewhat hopefull of the discovery of the one you speak of.
Re: Poems of Love by BleedingRose	13-Oct-04/10:12 PM
I have decided upon re-reading my own work that the main portion of this item was designed merely as a prolongment of my true message. As this goes against my belief in the truest qualities of communication, I have left only the portion that has ever had real meaning.