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Blush Of The Winter Rose (Other) by kassanna He came in the winter of my soul
When my heart lie silent and still
When the beauty of youthful summers had passed
And life's hand held me clenched in it's bitter chill
Many seasons my spirit lie dormant and frozen
Awaiting the warmth only love could bring
And then he arrived on the winds of fate
Destiny brought forth her burst of Spring
His gentleness fell like a fine dewy mist
And bathed me in laughter,his words how they nourished
And like a young seedling tended with care
Resurrected again, I stregnthened and flourished
Then when my petals regained vibrant blush
He stood back and smiled, and heaved a deep sigh
For the season of planting had come to it's end
It was time for my gardner to bid his goodbye
Oh how I miss this gardner of love
Perhaps one day he shall see how I've grown
I'm strong and thriving though winter's at hand
Sustained on memories of love once shown
Poetry by Kassanna
copyright:2001
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Posted: May 26, 2003 6:58 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2003 6:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5627 Comments:
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BleedingRose @ 65.172.117.1
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27-May-03/7:17 AM
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I love it! Okay, i might be a little biased just because of my little rose 'problem.' I think the rose can be used in so many ways to convey emotions like the rejuvination in your poem. I also like the simple rhyme scheme. It's beautiful!
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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27-May-03/12:40 PM
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No, it can't. three hundred to 500 years ago yes, but now... No. Try instead plastic posies... Now that's true love, roses, are way outdated, and all ready done a million ways better in poems you two still have yet to read, and never could come remotely close to writing nearly as well.
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kassanna @ 152.163.252.7
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27-May-03/1:14 PM
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roses may be outdated...but they still bare a prick
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BleedingRose @ 4.63.231.58
> Bachus
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27-May-03/6:39 PM
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Wow, you sound like a senile old English professor. Yet in your other posts you have the rantings of a hormone imbalanced porn king wanna-be with an inferiority complex. To answer you're response, I say your love is false. Using plastic posies as a symbol of love would be as using a woman's breasts to symbolize sex. As for my writings, I do not intend to be as good or better than any other writer, I merely convey my feelings in a way presentable to others. So I will continue to use the rose as my symbol of love and passion, and you can skip my writings if so you wish.
"He came in the winter of my soul" Yes! he came all over it. "Then when my petals regained vibrant blush
He stood back and smiled, and heaved a deep sigh". Baby, I would slurp on that tight little vulva of yours until you projectile orgasmed all over my dual face, and baby, I would gargle that hot steaming piss and go back for round 'the two'. I would introduce your ankles to your earlobes while my toes did the comforter dig/crawl. I would have my thumb prying in your hot sweet mouth while the other hand clenched head hair then I'd vibrate like an epileptic don juan until your eyeballs went satanic.
ah Bachus,seems you have me confused with another contortionist...the last time my ankels were introduced to my earlobes was in the womb...by the way..no one has been this graphic with me in over 25 years....and he saw my satanic eyes just before he became fish food.
Ah, but if you'd've read your mythology you'd know what happened to the last crew that tried to turn me into fish food wouldn't you love muffin.
lol Baba....did you sweep them under a rug with your magic broom?
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice.
We have all had our gardners
Yes Roses are out dated but nowhere other than the title does it actually say rose. I think Its a little harash to say that they'll Never write that well Bachus, I mean hey who knows? I give this a -7- cause its not bad but is a bit cliche(no offense), even tho you did the cliche well, I'm afraid I've seen better.
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