replying on ... by Jezabele-In-Hell
17 Oct 2004, 2:39 PM
I also "feel" that nothing you ever say has any relevance or meaning.
replying on Poems of Love by BleedingRose
14 Oct 2004, 2:34 PM
um, it wouldnt rhyme(sp?)
on Poems of Love by BleedingRose
13 Oct 2004, 10:12 PM
I have decided upon re-reading my own work that the main portion of this item was designed merely as a prolongment of my true message.
As this goes against my belief in the truest qualities of communication, I have left only the portion that has ever had real meaning.
As this goes against my belief in the truest qualities of communication, I have left only the portion that has ever had real meaning.
replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
13 Oct 2004, 10:03 PM
... ... thanks, I think.
replying on ... by Jezabele-In-Hell
13 Oct 2004, 10:00 PM
I have heard a little of these fallacies and disregard them as best I can when concerning any expression of the human mind or soul. I do not discredit or attempt to disprove them, but I believe poetry to be a conduit for our feelings and, as such, should reflect our inner turmoils. I speak to myself in my mind and often feel there is something within that simply cannot find the means with which to interact with the world. I do not know if others feel the same, but for this reason I see no error in expressing it.
on !!! by Jezabele-In-Hell
13 Oct 2004, 9:52 PM
The style of this poem is such that I enjoy reading and often write myself. I vote 9 not because it is imperfect in structure, which I believe only adds to it's effect and value, but because I would not dare give it the extremest approval untill I have seen more of your works and had a chance to compare thier worth. Furthermore, knowing you personally as I do, I am left curious and somewhat hopefull of the discovery of the one you speak of.
replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
10 Nov 2003, 3:38 PM
Thanks for the comment. Enjoy your time here and remember not to take anybody TOO seriously. :P
replying on Fides by BleedingRose
21 Jul 2003, 1:34 PM
"thanks"
on The first time in forever by Jeremi B. Handrinos
21 Jul 2003, 11:59 AM
Thank you.
replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 5:50 PM
Thank you for the tip. As for the repetition, it was intended in the first, third, and fifth parts (parts.. i dont know what they are called, stanza, verse, whatever) i shall have to wait until i find a reading buddy to sort out the others. Thx again.
replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 5:27 PM
Thank you for the sentiment. Please tell me what you think the next time i revise it. :)
on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik
30 May 2003, 3:19 PM
ooo hmmm yum.
on Lonely Soul by sir_heff
30 May 2003, 12:06 PM
okay, cuz im yur friend and all, i have to point out little things. there are a few bumps in the proverbial road of this poem. when they are smoothed it makes it easier for people to read and know what youre saying. the bumps include instances where ryhmes or lengths dont match up well (lines 1 and 8 maybe). and in certain areas you cease to use the pattern used throughout the rest of the poem (3rd stanza) but this IS free verse and you very well may have wanted it that way so maybe i shouldnt say anything. NEwho, i feel the idea behind it(though it may be a tad depressing). 8 on principal :)
replying on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
29 May 2003, 8:23 PM
No. At least I don't think so. Ive learned in the past that i have trouble making that call. but usually i can be sure that im not. its more of really screwing up and thinking i am. wait... what was i talking about? oh yeah. No.
replying on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
29 May 2003, 11:00 AM
In case you havent noticed, the guy in this poem is a FRIGGIN IDIOT! Im sure next year shell more than a little put off. Roses > Posies. except it
replying on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
28 May 2003, 5:40 PM
And thank you for the gratuity.
replying on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose
28 May 2003, 4:02 PM
Yes, yes. I would have to attribute the motivation for this poem to Bachus's little comment. (a comment on Blush of a Winter Rose by kassanna in case people are curious)
on Tears Of The Rose by kassanna
28 May 2003, 7:37 AM
OMG I love it! I hope you don't mind if I put this in my little book of 'keepers.' I'll be reading more of your work. :)
replying on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna
27 May 2003, 6:39 PM
Wow, you sound like a senile old English professor. Yet in your other posts you have the rantings of a hormone imbalanced porn king wanna-be with an inferiority complex. To answer you're response, I say your love is false. Using plastic posies as a symbol of love would be as using a woman's breasts to symbolize sex. As for my writings, I do not intend to be as good or better than any other writer, I merely convey my feelings in a way presentable to others. So I will continue to use the rose as my symbol of love and passion, and you can skip my writings if so you wish.
on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna
27 May 2003, 7:17 AM
I love it! Okay, i might be a little biased just because of my little rose 'problem.' I think the rose can be used in so many ways to convey emotions like the rejuvination in your poem. I also like the simple rhyme scheme. It's beautiful!