Poemranker [20 most recent comments by BleedingRose (21-40) and replies]

replying on Poems of Love by BleedingRose 27 Apr 2003, 11:33 AM

Did you give it a name? NEways, Im not quite sure what the relavence to the poem is ... well frankly i have no friggin clue... but thx, i guess. oh and umm Vote for me!

replying on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig 26 Apr 2003, 9:08 PM

sounds like a really hyper sesame street character...

replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose 26 Apr 2003, 8:47 PM

Vote for me please! (P.S. You're one of the most confusing, ranting, raving, altered-minded people ive seen on this site. Should be great fun!)

on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig 26 Apr 2003, 6:54 PM

I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!

replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose 25 Apr 2003, 3:36 PM

this is about inner restraints not love, but still it is a line that i have thought about revising, thx for the input.

replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose 24 Apr 2003, 10:24 AM

Any input would be much appreciated. This is still a work in progress but i wanted to post it to see others' opinions.

on hide by sir_heff 24 Apr 2003, 7:12 AM

I like the theme. BTW hurst = hearse. Only reason for semi-low score was that im not too big a fan of the "every-line-ryhmes-with-the-next" format.

replying on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose 23 Apr 2003, 11:37 AM

I see. Yet, can we not learn more knowing that someone has lied, than when they do not know how to express themselves with truths? Just a thought.

replying on my life by sir_heff 23 Apr 2003, 7:32 AM

If thats what came out, i say its perfect. if you try to hard to find something that sounds good, the point of your work will be lost.

on god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff 23 Apr 2003, 7:22 AM

As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.

on Life's Loves Lost by Jigg 23 Apr 2003, 6:46 AM

Great poem. It's quite vague in some parts, then again it's hard to be specific on such a topic. I feel can really relate to lines 13 and on.

replying on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose 22 Apr 2003, 11:26 AM

Glad you enjoyed it. Not really sure if ive convinced myself either. This is the result of a day of pondering why people lie and what good could come of it (and to sir_heff, i accidentally deleted your post! SORRY! plz repost it ASAP)

on beat myself with a stick by sir_heff 22 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM

Hey dude, can't say i like most of your stuff but this one appeals to me. I feel i could elaborate for hours around the second section. A few grammar and spelling corrections and i would love it.