Re: a comment on Poems of Love by BleedingRose	27-Apr-03/11:33 AM
Did you give it a name? NEways, Im not quite sure what the relavence to the poem is ... well frankly i have no friggin clue... but thx, i guess. oh and umm Vote for me!
Re: a comment on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	26-Apr-03/9:08 PM
sounds like a really hyper sesame street character...
Re: a comment on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	26-Apr-03/8:47 PM
Vote for me please! (P.S. You're one of the most confusing, ranting, raving, altered-minded people ive seen on this site. Should be great fun!)
Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig	26-Apr-03/6:54 PM
I love it! i think ill jot this one down in my little book. Though i cant give it a perfect score because of the whole haiku problem which others have already pointed out . but id love to see a revised edition!
Re: a comment on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	25-Apr-03/3:36 PM
this is about inner restraints not love, but still it is a line that i have thought about revising, thx for the input.
Re: a comment on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	24-Apr-03/10:24 AM
Any input would be much appreciated. This is still a work in progress but i wanted to post it to see others' opinions.
Re: hide by sir_heff	24-Apr-03/7:12 AM
I like the theme. BTW hurst = hearse. Only reason for semi-low score was that im not too big a fan of the "every-line-ryhmes-with-the-next" format.
Re: a comment on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose	23-Apr-03/11:37 AM
I see. Yet, can we not learn more knowing that someone has lied, than when they do not know how to express themselves with truths? Just a thought.
Re: a comment on my life by sir_heff	23-Apr-03/7:32 AM
If thats what came out, i say its perfect. if you try to hard to find something that sounds good, the point of your work will be lost.
Re: god damn P.D.A. by sir_heff	23-Apr-03/7:22 AM
As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.
Re: Life's Loves Lost by Jigg	23-Apr-03/6:46 AM
Great poem. It's quite vague in some parts, then again it's hard to be specific on such a topic. I feel can really relate to lines 13 and on.
Re: a comment on Truth in Lies by BleedingRose	22-Apr-03/11:26 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. Not really sure if ive convinced myself either. This is the result of a day of pondering why people lie and what good could come of it (and to sir_heff, i accidentally deleted your post! SORRY! plz repost it ASAP)
Re: beat myself with a stick by sir_heff	22-Apr-03/8:53 AM
Hey dude, can't say i like most of your stuff but this one appeals to me. I feel i could elaborate for hours around the second section. A few grammar and spelling corrections and i would love it.