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Tears Of The Rose (Villanelle) by kassanna
Have you ever seen the tears of a Rose Touched by the dew of morning mist A flower so fragrant and deep in her color Her hues are the blush of a fairy's kiss Yet the velvety petals Which she has borne Is nothing compared To the secret she bares For to reach out and touch her You will soon find The rose in her innocence Produces a Thorn now the thorn by itself Not as pretty as she Was placed to protect her With all of his might Together...Forever The two live as one The Rose as his Queen The Thorn as her Knight Poetry by Kassanna copyright:2000 ------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4545455
Weighted score: 4.7272725
Overall Rank: 11853
Posted: May 19, 2003 2:14 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2003 2:14 PM PDT
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[10] BleedingRose @ 65.172.117.1 | 28-May-03/7:37 AM | Reply
OMG I love it! I hope you don't mind if I put this in my little book of 'keepers.' I'll be reading more of your work. :)
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