Re: Too Much by intheailse	21-Mar-03/11:19 AM
This is an awesome poem, I feel the same alot of the time, I know I have skill and potential but its all just a pipe dream unless I do something about it.
Re: Tearing Me Apart (again) by intheailse	21-Mar-03/11:16 AM
Very nice
Re: a comment on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger	21-Mar-03/11:14 AM
I like the "crickets song" its original
Re: PIGS of the world by wLeBlanc IIIw	20-Mar-03/9:36 PM
Why do habe to go and trash God like that, whad he ever do to you
Re: I'll Break You Down by Crakyamuni	18-Mar-03/5:57 PM
Crap i meant "or as"i always do that
Re: I'll Break You Down by Crakyamuni	18-Mar-03/5:56 PM
Corporate america sucks, of as horus would say laggniappe
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	18-Mar-03/5:51 PM
Here it is, Submerged in endless (trailing off) I watch them fade by (sigh) Lifeless and Stone-faced (paining on) I see... The face I use to be They want to feel this (straining on) They want to sense this (now) Drunk with existence (waking me) I'll show you something (someone) you can feel
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	18-Mar-03/5:48 PM
This poem reminds me of a Project 86 song in the way it is put together. Nice job horus, whats with the 8 in your name anyways?
Re: Green genius by INTRANSIT	18-Mar-03/5:41 PM
um..hmm
Re: iodine and baby oil by rockinindividual	18-Mar-03/5:30 PM
The whole baby oil thing sounds a little wierd but works. Could have used a little more backround on the charecter maybe
Re: Horse meat & pistols by <{Baba^Yaga}>	18-Mar-03/5:19 PM
Strange and obscene
Re: A Face Of Sadness by mr_ice55	18-Mar-03/2:02 PM
Awesome, could be better if u dropped the last para tho. And changed "pillow" to somthing else
Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8	18-Mar-03/12:15 PM
Cool
Re: a comment on Tell me I suck by Blindproject217	18-Mar-03/12:07 PM
Cool thanx
Re: a comment on lost by elizabethann	17-Mar-03/4:16 PM
I understand it, I just dont see where its going. Its just a random mental image with no purpose. I dont mean to trash peoples stuff, Im just given my 10 cents, thats what this whole thing is about
Re: lost by elizabethann	17-Mar-03/4:13 PM
Not sure what u mean
Re: While flipping over stones by <{Baba^Yaga}>	17-Mar-03/4:10 PM
I like it
Re: untitled by angel_uy	17-Mar-03/4:09 PM
Awesome
Re: a comment on Tell me I suck by Blindproject217	17-Mar-03/4:06 PM
hahah ok
Re: a comment on Another Dull Moment by Blindproject217	17-Mar-03/9:45 AM
Thanx this is my first real attempt at this so it kinda sux.