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A Face Of Sadness (Other) by mr_ice55
A spiraling circle descending down towards nothing. Blurring images
spinning round representing what I once had. A childhood lost in the
sandglass, memories of happiness seem so distant, like the light that
comes from a fading star. The music sways the rhythmic horse, a lullaby
for the heart. Trying to recollect certain dreams, visions of lost hope
weave their web around this lost little boy.
I hide myself in the shadows, hoping this black figure will stop hunting
me. My Mary is but a fallen angel, I can see her cry tears that turn to
rain. Like a rose blooming in an autumn wind, she stands strong, praying
for the dawning moon to relieve the sky from its eternal suffering. Our
love can bind our soul together; fate?s cruel hand cannot take you away
from me. This mirror seems so hollow, reflecting a happiness lost in
times endless hole. Reality now seems but a dream, a life suffocated by
pain and loneliness, my screams muffled by a pillow. The darkness I once
embraced now turns to a lone candle, lit by a dying earth, a sunless sky
left to ponder its existence, no light to guide it home.
I'm watching the sandglass now; I can see my memories slipping away like
the sand. I look down at the Caracal, I don't wish to pick it up, it
just looks so beautiful. The rose I once planted is now wilting away,
each petal slowly falls, like a forgotten spring, and next to them lay a
frozen horse, once mine to hold, it?s now lifeless on the ground, broken
and full of sorrow.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9043
Posted: March 18, 2003 5:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2003 5:17 AM PST
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