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Horse meat & pistols (Villanelle) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
Momma said I weren't to havin' no future. "What in the fuck is you staring at?" Hi! I'm Orson, I'll be your new butcher. Feel these saugage, now that's a SUTURE! (But you've never seen a boy that damn fat.) Momma said I weren't to havin' no future. He whips out his wallet, to show you his pictures. (Across your feet gallops a big juicy rat.) Hi! I'm Orson, I'll be your new butcher. Screaming is heard from behind sheet'd furniture. (Orson's eyes go suddenly black, vacant, and flat.) Momma said I weren't to havin' no future. The gleam of his knife, such a nasty curvature. (As you remember some famous Roman diplomat.) Hi! I'm Orson, I'll be your new butcher. (But little does Orson know, you carry a Ruger.) "Thanks Orson for the *bang*, and the chat". Momma said I weren't to havin' no future. Hi! I'm Orson, I'll be your new butcher.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.7
Weighted score: 5.85
Overall Rank: 1572
Posted: January 18, 2003 11:21 PM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2003 4:57 PM PST
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[5] Blindproject217 @ 68.86.0.162 | 18-Mar-03/5:19 PM | Reply
Strange and obscene
[8] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 18-Mar-03/9:58 PM | Reply
Ahh poor Orson. :( I was rooting for him too. Oh well. 8.
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