| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Jun-03/9:26 AM |
Amusing 10.
This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
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6-Jun-03/1:15 PM |
You have more sides to you than a cuboid, good show !
If you have moment please spend a peekaboo at my latests my dear.
Thank you.
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| Re: Z higher of arts by ==Doylum |
21-Jun-03/9:50 AM |
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Jolly hockeysticks this raised my furred brow and by columbus I liked it. 6
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| Re: Mistaken Battlefields by Brian Tiensvold |
26-Jun-03/1:44 PM |
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Formulaic, yet I applaud the end it was impounding. 6
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26-Jun-03/1:46 PM |
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I left you a note in the suggestion box my darling.
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| Re: TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie |
26-Jun-03/1:51 PM |
Are you Poet and know it? this has his distinctive hall mark of castigating put downs.
I found English teachers about as accessible as wading through glue, yet it made one laugh a little so 6 tank tops for you.
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| Re: Canada Blows by teenpoetryshoulddie |
26-Jun-03/1:52 PM |
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| Re: Tomorrow by Quarton |
26-Jun-03/1:58 PM |
The opening line sounds like a voice over for a chick flick so lose that, Stanz 2 is the most interesting and I wanted more from it and it left me a bit frustrated for I see you have the potential for possibly a grandoise work.
Sorry I wanted to 8 or 9 this but it needs more to it. ^6
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| Re: Tomorrow by Quarton |
26-Jun-03/1:59 PM |
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Nice to see you back Quarton, hope your well.
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| Re: only pleasure left by richa |
26-Jun-03/2:02 PM |
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Keep it all, its dandy. (and besides your so methodical I bet you its all been sorted prior to it being on here
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5-Jul-03/8:32 AM |
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| Re: Untitled #13 by david |
5-Jul-03/8:38 AM |
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Thought provoking and may I say well done my boy.
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| Re: Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz |
5-Jul-03/8:40 AM |
Somebody told me once I looked like Jeff Goldblum and when I watched this film I was mortified.
The last part sounds like something George Dubya would say.
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| Re: Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz |
5-Jul-03/8:41 AM |
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I think I look more debonair than Jeff Goldblum, I wonder how you paste one's photo on to the the international superhighway
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5-Jul-03/8:47 AM |
Good Lord !
Their seems to be a distinct lack of love and mutual respect for each other here. I am not siding but am disconsolate to see such anger and hatred.
Do please try to get on I so hate confrontation, life is so short don't you think?
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| Re: hermetic by Bill Z Bub |
21-Jul-03/1:03 PM |
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I think its grand you have not over jammed this tart.8
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| Re: Lord of the Swines by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
22-Jul-03/10:32 AM |
These were your comments on my poem Yellow Star, and I wish to remind you of them because your a hypocrite.
thought it was poorly written, and to an average kid into poetry, it's incomprehendible anyway. I hope it goes to #1. Good day.
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| Re: Truckin' by INTRANSIT |
22-Jul-03/11:16 AM |
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A wondrous insight in to your job, I bet your a cool trucker.8
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| Re: education by richa |
22-Jul-03/11:18 AM |
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Wonderfully versed and the 3rd line is sheer perfection.
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| Re: Witness to a Murder by poetandknowit |
4-Aug-03/3:28 PM |
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Reading this was like wading through glue.
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