on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum
21 Jun 2003, 9:50 AM
Jolly hockeysticks this raised my furred brow and by columbus I liked it. 6
on Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz
5 Jul 2003, 8:41 AM
I think I look more debonair than Jeff Goldblum, I wonder how you paste one's photo on to the the international superhighway
on Witness to a Murder by poetandknowit
4 Aug 2003, 3:28 PM
Reading this was like wading through glue.
on Lord of the Swines by <{Baba^Yaga}>
22 Jul 2003, 10:32 AM
These were your comments on my poem Yellow Star, and I wish to remind you of them because your a hypocrite.
thought it was poorly written, and to an average kid into poetry, it's incomprehendible anyway. I hope it goes to #1. Good day.
thought it was poorly written, and to an average kid into poetry, it's incomprehendible anyway. I hope it goes to #1. Good day.
on Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz
5 Jul 2003, 8:40 AM
Somebody told me once I looked like Jeff Goldblum and when I watched this film I was mortified.
The last part sounds like something George Dubya would say.
The last part sounds like something George Dubya would say.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 8:47 AM
Good Lord !
Their seems to be a distinct lack of love and mutual respect for each other here. I am not siding but am disconsolate to see such anger and hatred.
Do please try to get on I so hate confrontation, life is so short don't you think?
Their seems to be a distinct lack of love and mutual respect for each other here. I am not siding but am disconsolate to see such anger and hatred.
Do please try to get on I so hate confrontation, life is so short don't you think?
on Mistaken Battlefields by Brian Tiensvold
26 Jun 2003, 1:44 PM
Formulaic, yet I applaud the end it was impounding. 6
on some deleted poem
26 Jun 2003, 1:46 PM
I left you a note in the suggestion box my darling.
on TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie
26 Jun 2003, 1:51 PM
Are you Poet and know it? this has his distinctive hall mark of castigating put downs.
I found English teachers about as accessible as wading through glue, yet it made one laugh a little so 6 tank tops for you.
I found English teachers about as accessible as wading through glue, yet it made one laugh a little so 6 tank tops for you.
on Canada Blows by teenpoetryshoulddie
26 Jun 2003, 1:52 PM
And the point is?
The opening line sounds like a voice over for a chick flick so lose that, Stanz 2 is the most interesting and I wanted more from it and it left me a bit frustrated for I see you have the potential for possibly a grandoise work.
Sorry I wanted to 8 or 9 this but it needs more to it. ^6
Sorry I wanted to 8 or 9 this but it needs more to it. ^6
on only pleasure left by richa
26 Jun 2003, 2:02 PM
Keep it all, its dandy. (and besides your so methodical I bet you its all been sorted prior to it being on here
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2003, 1:15 PM
You have more sides to you than a cuboid, good show !
If you have moment please spend a peekaboo at my latests my dear.
Thank you.
If you have moment please spend a peekaboo at my latests my dear.
Thank you.
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
3 Jun 2003, 9:26 AM
Amusing 10.
This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
This should help your 7.61 vote my dear muse.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 8:32 AM
Marvellous and true.
on Untitled #13 by david
5 Jul 2003, 8:38 AM
Thought provoking and may I say well done my boy.
on hermetic by Bill Z Bub
21 Jul 2003, 1:03 PM
I think its grand you have not over jammed this tart.8