| Re: Bombs by Shardik |
17-Apr-03/3:37 AM |
Shardik Sir, if you have time out of what one imagines a busy schedule please will you click in the comments section of my user name and see a comment I left on one of Nicholas Jones poems about politicians.
Sincerely
Laurence.
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| Re: Released by INTRANSIT |
28-Apr-03/1:35 PM |
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I was perusing this on fine milled paper as do like to print the longer poems out and have a darn good gander at them. I was interested in the capitulaton of the piece and I think Mr Caducus made an interesting comment about perspective. It reads as a very adult piece, from the last 2 lines of S1 I felt empathy and solace in the fact we all share the hurt of a lost bond wish to to say thank you for writing this it left me feeling happy on my own with a half baked cuban and a glass of sour mash over ice: 9: Take care my kindred friend.
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| Re: Ode to a Sock by JakeBike |
28-Apr-03/1:51 PM |
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| Re: Burst! by INTRANSIT |
20-May-03/12:47 PM |
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Bloody marvellous but the term Tsunami is over baking the Spotted Dick im my humble opinion. As ever though your work is an asset to this site. May I offer you an 8 I/T, would that be okay?
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20-May-03/12:49 PM |
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My folly is sometimes I have a problem shortening ones lines but you my daffodil do it admirably and I have to say, I envy. 9
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20-May-03/12:52 PM |
Oh My, is this what they call downtown a 'Rap' and I'm slightly out of touch in todays music scene but I watched a film lately with an actor absurdly names Eminem. is that the same boy here or have I mispelled his name. I actually quite like this, I may read it to my stable boy (Fergus) who likes all this hop hip, blingy blingy carry on.
Yes.
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| Re: Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
20-May-03/12:53 PM |
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20-May-03/12:54 PM |
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Oh good gracious, please excuse me.
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| Re: Activating your Infinity by horus8 |
20-May-03/12:59 PM |
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Sounds like a scene from the Bible, Sweet Endymion ! A fine read Mr H I enjoyed the motion of the narrative. I have never travelled to HNL before, my skin blisters in the heat and I felt quite ill. Maybe one day I'll come and, no you wouldn;t be seen dead with me, forgive me my beautiful Horus. Take an 8 and hears to you my man - Cheers !
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20-May-03/1:08 PM |
Hello again my deity.
Well what comment can I add that hasn't already been so eloquently put by the other kindreds? You remain an inspiration to me as I'm sure others would agree.
I need to go now and tend to my foliage.
Good day to you all.
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| Re: spring by <~> |
20-May-03/1:12 PM |
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Your the Queen of this form, I bow for your tap of the sword.
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| Re: The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus |
28-May-03/8:13 AM |
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| Re: Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz |
28-May-03/8:20 AM |
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28-May-03/8:22 AM |
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| Re: beat myself with a stick by sir_heff |
28-May-03/8:23 AM |
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Alas so true my tortured soul.
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| Re: Cliche by Blue Magpie |
28-May-03/8:25 AM |
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I have a soft spot for this, well done.
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28-May-03/8:27 AM |
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28-May-03/8:28 AM |
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And so nice to see you commenting prolificly :)
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| Re: The last of the sworn heels by Bachus |
28-May-03/8:29 AM |
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The last stanza and 3/4 I found compelling and rich in verse. Good work my boy ! 8
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| Re: Spit wad by Shardik |
29-May-03/8:28 AM |
I so believe I may know who this is about but cockfighting was never my strong point. I did however find this profusely amusing and this is a really effective put down.
One was amused ! Heres 10 farthings to spend on the phone call to the sinister man in the pin stripe suit.
Very Chicago.
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