on some deleted poem
28 May 2003, 8:22 AM
Holy Hippopotamas !
on Cliche by Blue Magpie
28 May 2003, 8:25 AM
I have a soft spot for this, well done.
on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz
28 May 2003, 8:20 AM
How vulgar, you lout !
on beat myself with a stick by sir_heff
28 May 2003, 8:23 AM
Alas so true my tortured soul.
on some deleted poem
28 May 2003, 8:27 AM
Jolly nice my muse.
on some deleted poem
28 May 2003, 8:28 AM
And so nice to see you commenting prolificly :)
on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus
28 May 2003, 8:29 AM
The last stanza and 3/4 I found compelling and rich in verse. Good work my boy ! 8
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 12:49 PM
My folly is sometimes I have a problem shortening ones lines but you my daffodil do it admirably and I have to say, I envy. 9
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 12:52 PM
Oh My, is this what they call downtown a 'Rap' and I'm slightly out of touch in todays music scene but I watched a film lately with an actor absurdly names Eminem. is that the same boy here or have I mispelled his name. I actually quite like this, I may read it to my stable boy (Fergus) who likes all this hop hip, blingy blingy carry on.
Yes.
Yes.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 12:54 PM
Oh good gracious, please excuse me.
on Activating your Infinity by horus8
20 May 2003, 12:59 PM
Sounds like a scene from the Bible, Sweet Endymion ! A fine read Mr H I enjoyed the motion of the narrative. I have never travelled to HNL before, my skin blisters in the heat and I felt quite ill. Maybe one day I'll come and, no you wouldn;t be seen dead with me, forgive me my beautiful Horus. Take an 8 and hears to you my man - Cheers !
on some deleted poem
20 May 2003, 1:08 PM
Hello again my deity.
Well what comment can I add that hasn't already been so eloquently put by the other kindreds? You remain an inspiration to me as I'm sure others would agree.
I need to go now and tend to my foliage.
Good day to you all.
Well what comment can I add that hasn't already been so eloquently put by the other kindreds? You remain an inspiration to me as I'm sure others would agree.
I need to go now and tend to my foliage.
Good day to you all.
I was perusing this on fine milled paper as do like to print the longer poems out and have a darn good gander at them. I was interested in the capitulaton of the piece and I think Mr Caducus made an interesting comment about perspective. It reads as a very adult piece, from the last 2 lines of S1 I felt empathy and solace in the fact we all share the hurt of a lost bond wish to to say thank you for writing this it left me feeling happy on my own with a half baked cuban and a glass of sour mash over ice: 9: Take care my kindred friend.
on Ode to a Sock by JakeBike
28 Apr 2003, 1:51 PM
Oh sweet Columbus.
on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus
28 May 2003, 8:13 AM
Oh my
on Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
20 May 2003, 12:53 PM
You naughty boy.
One was amused ! Heres 10 farthings to spend on the phone call to the sinister man in the pin stripe suit.
Very Chicago.