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Haiku № 47301

Bombs

by Shardik

Member since 2003 · Posted 16 Apr 2003 · 4 comments

Teach our limbless children about brainless men.

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[10] Mr Pig 17-Apr-03/3:35 AM Reply
Perfect my fellow. This says all it needs to say about war, powerful and conclusive my dear friend I am honoured to have read it. 10
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Mr Pig 23-May-03/9:49 PM Reply
What are you talking about? This doesn't say anything about war. It just expresses a vague anti-war sentiment that doesn't have any propositional content. The only function of this haiku is to confirm the prejudices of whoever reads it. It is perfect for the job because it says nothing but it contains the word 'children' so people like you think it must be meaningful.
[n/a] Shardik › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 30-May-03/12:07 PM Reply
You are a very funny little man.
[10] Mr Pig 17-Apr-03/3:37 AM Reply
Shardik Sir, if you have time out of what one imagines a busy schedule please will you click in the comments section of my user name and see a comment I left on one of Nicholas Jones poems about politicians.

Sincerely

Laurence.