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Bombs (Haiku) by Shardik

Teach our limbless children about brainless men.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23-May-03/9:49 PM
What are you talking about? This doesn't say anything about war. It just expresses a vague anti-war sentiment that doesn't have any propositional content. The only function of this haiku is to confirm the prejudices of whoever reads it. It is perfect for the job because it says nothing but it contains the word 'children' so people like you think it must be meaningful.




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