poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Spindle and replies

Comments bySpindle, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Andrew part II by Spindle 22 Dec 2004, 2:45 PM
Not to yell at you or anything, but I would just ike to comment on the fact that whenever someone writes a sad poem people patronize them, saying that at least they don't have cancer or AIDS or something, and whenever someone writes a happy poem they are called naive and fake. How can you win like that?
Oh, and just so you know, this peom wasn't just about losing my virginity. I hope that's not how it came across to everyone.
replying on A Poem by BigB 7 Sep 2004, 8:50 AM
Ok, if you were in such a rush why didn't you just not finish or submit the poem? Wait until you have time to make it the right way.
on Intervention by livingcanvas 10 May 2004, 4:14 PM
asking 'Could I possibly be next?'
This sounds rather choppy. You may want to work on your rhyme scheme. All in all I liked it
replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 10 Apr 2004, 8:52 AM
Excuse me, but I have had some experience. I never said I was the one doing the drugs, did I?
replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 9 Apr 2004, 9:10 PM
"a marijuana?" Can we just stick to what this site is suppose to be about; reading other peoples' works and critiquing them instead of making petty insults towards personality flaws you think you find in the two sentences you read of a comment by them?
replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 8 Apr 2004, 6:56 PM
o.k......
replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 8 Apr 2004, 12:25 PM
Marijuana. "...roam jesters in lace/dancing round like the smoke in the sky." Get it?
replying on The Kings of Paradise by Spindle 7 Apr 2004, 9:01 PM
Actually, it's about drugs.
on A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Apr 2004, 8:08 PM
Love it
replying on It Won't Last Long by Spindle 2 Apr 2004, 8:08 PM
well, that's kind of how I felt about it too at first. He's my first boyfriend and I had no idea what I was doing; I was just going through the motions (only at first, obviously)
on Red Dress Wearing One Boot Cowboy by Lenore 2 Apr 2004, 7:45 PM
nice title
on love comes but once by francis nor capule 2 Apr 2004, 7:35 PM
hehe, you caught me in a good mood. I just left my boyfriend's house and i miss him :-P being sappy can be fun
on ode to summer dreams by jsd 2 Apr 2004, 7:25 PM
"wheels roll and i'm on my way to feeling whole" is ackward but I loved "under dusklit skies/entranced by golden eyes" keep it up :)
on PEOPLE. (Debut) by Doc 2 Apr 2004, 7:15 PM
2 2 2!
on Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme 2 Apr 2004, 7:11 PM
mmmmmmmm :-) very nice. It makes me long for summer
on A Dangling Poo by zodiac 31 Mar 2004, 7:18 PM
I was going to be nice and give you a one, but that gay comment lost you another point. If you're going to have some random, unintelligent statement like that in your poetry, you should at least have the decency to make it a somewhat good poem.
on Espera by GekoHawaii 29 Mar 2004, 10:11 AM
Interested in being an architect are we? (angles?) Hehe, and you forgot the s' silly, :-p Oh, guess who....ahahahahaha