| Re: Espera by GekoHawaii |
29-Mar-04/10:11 AM |
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Interested in being an architect are we? (angles?) Hehe, and you forgot the s' silly, :-p Oh, guess who....ahahahahaha
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| Re: A Dangling Poo by zodiac |
31-Mar-04/7:18 PM |
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I was going to be nice and give you a one, but that gay comment lost you another point. If you're going to have some random, unintelligent statement like that in your poetry, you should at least have the decency to make it a somewhat good poem.
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| Re: Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme |
2-Apr-04/7:11 PM |
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mmmmmmmm :-) very nice. It makes me long for summer
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| Re: PEOPLE. (Debut) by Doc |
2-Apr-04/7:15 PM |
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| Re: ode to summer dreams by jsd |
2-Apr-04/7:25 PM |
"wheels roll and i'm on my way to feeling whole" is ackward but I loved "under dusklit skies/entranced by golden eyes" keep it up :)
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| Re: love comes but once by francis nor capule |
2-Apr-04/7:35 PM |
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hehe, you caught me in a good mood. I just left my boyfriend's house and i miss him :-P being sappy can be fun
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| Re: Red Dress Wearing One Boot Cowboy by Lenore |
2-Apr-04/7:45 PM |
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| Re: A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
7-Apr-04/8:08 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-May-04/4:11 PM |
you can try to be unique
not one
person like yourself
you're really really different
just like EVERYBODY
ELSE!
This is really great. Certainly the best part of the whole poem.
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| Re: Intervention by livingcanvas |
10-May-04/4:14 PM |
asking 'Could I possibly be next?'
This sounds rather choppy. You may want to work on your rhyme scheme. All in all I liked it
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