on Espera by GekoHawaii
29 Mar 2004, 10:11 AM
Interested in being an architect are we? (angles?) Hehe, and you forgot the s' silly, :-p Oh, guess who....ahahahahaha
on A Dangling Poo by zodiac
31 Mar 2004, 7:18 PM
I was going to be nice and give you a one, but that gay comment lost you another point. If you're going to have some random, unintelligent statement like that in your poetry, you should at least have the decency to make it a somewhat good poem.
on Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme
2 Apr 2004, 7:11 PM
mmmmmmmm :-) very nice. It makes me long for summer
on PEOPLE. (Debut) by Doc
2 Apr 2004, 7:15 PM
2 2 2!
on ode to summer dreams by jsd
2 Apr 2004, 7:25 PM
"wheels roll and i'm on my way to feeling whole" is ackward but I loved "under dusklit skies/entranced by golden eyes" keep it up :)
on love comes but once by francis nor capule
2 Apr 2004, 7:35 PM
hehe, you caught me in a good mood. I just left my boyfriend's house and i miss him :-P being sappy can be fun
on Red Dress Wearing One Boot Cowboy by Lenore
2 Apr 2004, 7:45 PM
nice title
on A Little Further by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Apr 2004, 8:08 PM
Love it
on some deleted poem
10 May 2004, 4:11 PM
you can try to be unique
not one
person like yourself
you're really really different
just like EVERYBODY
ELSE!
This is really great. Certainly the best part of the whole poem.
not one
person like yourself
you're really really different
just like EVERYBODY
ELSE!
This is really great. Certainly the best part of the whole poem.
on Intervention by livingcanvas
10 May 2004, 4:14 PM
asking 'Could I possibly be next?'
This sounds rather choppy. You may want to work on your rhyme scheme. All in all I liked it
This sounds rather choppy. You may want to work on your rhyme scheme. All in all I liked it