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Lyric № 47428

Espera

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

Longing now for days of yore When life did rest on another shore Until my dreams away were torn And my new life, unwilled, was born Until she gave a heart of gold And gave me reason to behold Real beauty, life, and truth be told She was a flower in the cold She gave me hope to carry on Even after she had gone A love of loves, twas never pawned She will return one coming dawn And yet thou wills to change my heart And feed me thoughts of her depart A target of thy evil dart With love of her I shall not part Thou shalt no longer be malign For thou hath reached thy final line Thou wilt no longer use thy time To kill off others thoughts devine I'll end thy reign, for love is strong And thou can't break eternal bonds My heart, for her, shall always long Despite you willingness to con When she returns I will renew A love more constant than the dew And in her heart a seed I'll sew My love of angles flaming hew

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[7] Luv2write 5-May-03/7:48 PM Reply
Lovely.
[9] Spindle 29-Mar-04/10:11 AM Reply
Interested in being an architect are we? (angles?) Hehe, and you forgot the s' silly, :-p Oh, guess who....ahahahahaha