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20 most recent comments by Shardik (321-340) and replies

Re: a comment on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik 24-Jul-03/9:31 PM
I believe this is what one would call 'focused aggression', but nice try!
Re: a comment on The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer 24-Jul-03/1:06 AM
Emphasis on the uncompromising rebellious nature you sadist, not the street, geez.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 24-Jul-03/1:02 AM
Six below that is one in a cell phone ring variety? Odd, to say the least, in fact gruesomely disturbing like frozen vomit on the side of a car.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/10:47 PM
A poem that beckons and warns, a talisman charged. A lighthouse bed with thin sheets and emberring fire gone red,
conserving itself for death in the morning after hot tea.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/10:43 PM
Loki's son is one, also known as Jagerhaunde, and Shen Ring.
Re: a comment on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23-Jul-03/10:42 PM
No! Never! Are you?
Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 23-Jul-03/10:19 PM
That's a lie. i've never gloated about my linguistics you oof. Even I know that grammar and spelling were never my strength, and often I let that be known, as I am now, for instance. I've boasted on imagination and structure development, and as with many, many, many, of my other satirical pieces that I do, in jest, I focus on many more prudent theoretical aspects involved with writing poetry. Such as the title and characters. Notice how this one brought in fifteen votes in an afternoon, though it's a heaping pile of huspux readings. That's half of your entire combined collection practically on the ranker. Ponder that, and next time you attempt to approach me like some sort of Bow tie pusher, think again, because, I don't believe we are on the same page, therefore, we seem to be having sort of miscommunication, or perhaps that was your attemp at seeming witty, however, it was tossed due to your absolute void of wit.
Re: a comment on Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik 23-Jul-03/10:06 PM
I'd wager you were lost at birth.
Re: Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer 16-Jul-03/12:45 PM
Very good, I'm proud of you, you've done it.
Re: Pretzel by daryash-koh 16-Jul-03/12:38 PM


Show me the leader whose eyes can withstand
The gaze of dead faces that leather in sand.
Blood on the lintel, and bile upon mat,
This is the suite where bellies grow fat.
Crimp the young shoots and press on by the nose,
Shiny green beetles shall devour your rose.
Re: Goodbye by Sunshine Conkey 16-Jul-03/12:36 PM
A wonderful thought.
Re: By children's mouths come intelligence by bondjedi 16-Jul-03/12:34 PM
Hippo manure grows things well, but they kill their young.
Re: Humans by snjofridur1 16-Jul-03/12:28 PM
Geomancy, good stuff.
Re: a comment on Hippy chic under the bleachers by Shardik 16-Jul-03/12:22 PM
I am fond of Don Quixote, not Ron Jeremy.
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik 15-Jul-03/7:46 PM
I heard you'll work for food... I have a can of spam I could give you if you'll suck my ten inch black cock. "helpful" on that, cunt .
Re: vacation by geewhiz1962 6-Jul-03/6:14 PM
You act as if you've been moonlighting as a poet, and are just exhausted... Poor dear.
Re: a comment on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6-Jul-03/6:12 PM
I like it so far, don't be critical, it makes me blush.
Re: a comment on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II 6-Jul-03/6:08 PM
Than who might you be?
Re: a comment on Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik 3-Jul-03/2:03 PM
Three what, poemes Doug? "Look everybody, our laddie fancies himself a poet, a poet everybody" Pink Floyd, circa. 1982.
Re: a comment on Snow Coning by Shardik 3-Jul-03/11:46 AM
Come on... He's too curious. You remember how much trouble we were in at the age of four? He's oblivious and surrounded by BBQ-ing Latinos named Chewia & Nina. He'll be fine, always. I'm the one usually begging him for attention, ironically.


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