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Snow Coning

by Shardik

Member since 2003 · Posted 3 Jul 2003 · Edited 3 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

Movie of the week "The man on the ice float" Drifting further south Than most have ever He spies a plane circling And decides to piss the word "Privacy" in immaculate cursive The plane writes "Buy a car this 4th of July!" In large puffy cottony letters The man ponders the invitation Then hunches down & scoops himself a snowcone out of his new home with his hat. Happy fucking Birth Day America.

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[8] RGallet 3-Jul-03/11:42 AM Reply
WB!!!!!!!!!! Your son must be heartbroken.
[n/a] Shardik › RGallet 3-Jul-03/11:46 AM Reply
Come on... He's too curious. You remember how much trouble we were in at the age of four? He's oblivious and surrounded by BBQ-ing Latinos named Chewia & Nina. He'll be fine, always. I'm the one usually begging him for attention, ironically.
[n/a] King Abdullah II 3-Jul-03/11:56 AM Reply
YOU ARE AN IMPOSTER

I AM SHARDIK
[n/a] Bachus › King Abdullah II 3-Jul-03/4:04 PM Reply
Arghhhhhhh burrrrrrrr Arghhhhhhhh burrrrr
lol, LO/Ml;g.