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Snow Coning (Free verse) by Shardik Movie of the week
"The man on the ice float"
Drifting further south
Than most have ever
He spies a plane circling
And decides to piss the word
"Privacy" in immaculate cursive
The plane writes
"Buy a car this 4th of July!"
In large puffy cottony letters
The man ponders the invitation
Then hunches down & scoops himself
a snowcone out of his new home with his hat.
Happy fucking Birth Day America.
Up the ladder:
Tree (WARNING: do NOT hug!)
Down the ladder:
Synergy
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: July 3, 2003 12:28 AM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2003 11:28 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.75 Overall Rank: 11709 Comments:
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RGallet @ 67.75.25.153
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3-Jul-03/11:42 AM
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WB!!!!!!!!!! Your son must be heartbroken.
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Shardik @ 24.126.113.154
> RGallet
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3-Jul-03/11:46 AM
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Come on... He's too curious. You remember how much trouble we were in at the age of four? He's oblivious and surrounded by BBQ-ing Latinos named Chewia & Nina. He'll be fine, always. I'm the one usually begging him for attention, ironically.
YOU ARE AN IMPOSTER
I AM SHARDIK
Arghhhhhhh burrrrrrrr Arghhhhhhhh burrrrr
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