Re: a comment on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Feb-03/1:29 AM
"Thus, anyone who liked this poem who isn't a male hustler is liking it because the subject matter is novel, and because it is written well enough to believe that it really means something to someone somewhere." Do you really believe that line of shit? You mean that you can't feel sorry for a child that's been molested unless you yourself have been molested? You mean that you can't feel sorry for a person who can't find employment unless you've ever had the problem? You mean that you can't have sympathy with out total, utter, and complete empathy? What ever happened to crossing that gap? Maybe I've never been a male prositute but I can relate to being shunned for other choices I've made (and some things that aren't choices). Have you never made a wrong choice and been aware that others knew it? Have you never looked into the eyes of another person and been able to see that they didn't like either you or actions? That is all it takes to empathise with the poor fellow. If you haven't the thought alone should stir some sympathy in you. I can also relate to being broken hearted. That is something I would think that even if you had never been through you would feel sorry for him about.
Re: Lamente el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>	24-Feb-03/1:03 AM
It's good. He must be too if he can afford Grey Goose. 7.
Re: Have You Ever Felt That? by NewbieMe	21-Feb-03/10:04 AM
Yes I have. A Summer living pretty much alone on a college campus will do that to you. On the other hand when everyone comes back in the Fall you appreciate the company that much more.
Re: a comment on Eros, and Psycho by horus8	21-Feb-03/12:34 AM
If only you had told me earlier. You see I just started another relationship and with the way things are going if you decide to wait for me it will be a long while. I'm sorry we missed out on a chance to makesomething wonderful together. Guess we'll have to stick to making just decent poems.
Re: Eros, and Psycho by horus8	20-Feb-03/11:56 PM
While I still find your comments on other people's poems obnoxious I must admit that I enjoyed this one. I don't understand how someone voted it a zero unless you have really enraged someone that much with your comments. I do find that some of the people here are rather fickle. 7.
Re: a comment on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/8:32 PM
Nothing like a vengeful person hell bent on destroying you for offering help. Let it stand no as known fact that I will ignore you because nothing you are saying is making sense nor do you bother trying to understand anything.
Re: a comment on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/8:30 PM
a) Let's see. Can we read? I already said I tried editing it. Thank you anyway. b) Why give you a book of proverbs you don't understand? If I put it in that book you still wouldn't get the point. c) Rank how you want.
Re: a comment on Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin	13-Feb-03/8:26 PM
Twatface... hmmm... probably not but interesting concept. The way I say it and people around me say it it comes out as 2 syllables (The "ed" comes out as a strong "tugh" sound thus giving another vowel sound.) but if you wish you can make it one. I can see how it would work. How many fingers am I? If fingers are symbolic for years then I'm 21. If I have trouble counting to one than I have some real hardships ahead. (When "Bumblefuck" is used as a name, as in your comment, it gets a capital b.;)) I apologize for trying to offer help. XoXo, Assmuch.
Re: Positivism and Behaviourism:They Suck by razorgrin	13-Feb-03/12:15 PM
Chased (2) + by (1)+ Pavlov's (2) + dog (1) = 6
Re: a comment on The Boys and Girls Club of London by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/12:13 PM
Thank you.
Re: a comment on The Boys and Girls Club of London by OneFingerAnswer	13-Feb-03/2:16 AM
Yeah. I actually posted this one cause I wasn't happy with it. I wanted to see if someone could help me sort it out. As for the other idea, most of my poems are about stuff that's happened to me. "The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted or An Explanation" is to someone who was there when I needed but wouldn't accept help. "Castle of Sand" sounds like it's about jilted love (which is where most of mine center) but it's actually to my dad who died when I was very young. "Jeff" was my attempt to get a grip on my feeling about a friend's suicide and to see things from his side. "Thornwood (Splinters)" was actually writen as a drunken attempt to get over an ex and then cleaned up some the next morning. So I've written many poems about what has happened to and around me. The only one that's really about where I'm from is "Small Town Snow" and that one is pretty easy to read and get. Actually I think most of my stuff is by time I get to where I'm happy with it. Thanks and if you don't want to helpo with this I understand (I've worked on it a lot just to get this far) but I'd appreciate it if you'd check out some of my others.
Re: a comment on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg	13-Feb-03/2:05 AM
I didn't have any specifics but I was thinking that it kind of stands for those small thing in life that we give up for people we truely love.
Re: a comment on The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg	12-Feb-03/7:55 PM
Fair enough I suppose. I still liked it.
Re: The Importance of Mr. Straughter by GregDeEgg	12-Feb-03/1:11 PM
Ahh yes... tell me does the fritter symoblize something more? Surely it must and I have the general idea but I wonder if you had a more specific idea.
Re: time by keatsImnot	12-Feb-03/1:05 PM
Nice. I'm a sucker for symbolism even when it's not intended. I don't know what you were thinking but I see an old lady losing her beauty and her friends. Sad but good. 7.5 (rounded up since we don't have halfs)
Re: a comment on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer	7-Feb-03/2:47 PM
I tried fixing that... Damn it. Oh well.
Re: a comment on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer	5-Feb-03/2:58 PM
Oops Yeah I can't count or spell. Oh well...
Re: a comment on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum	4-Feb-03/5:52 PM
Most notable correction I have is that this is very much not a haiku.
Re: a comment on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer	4-Feb-03/3:00 PM
Honestly I'm not sure. Each stanza is a 5-7-5 but it's all meant to be read together. I don't know if each one is a Haiku or if the whole thing collectively is a Haiku. I just wrote the thing. :P
Re: a comment on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Feb-03/2:46 PM
Drow is also a type of elf known to be particularly nasty. They usually live deep underground and rarely come out.