| Re: a comment on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Feb-03/11:01 PM |
2. No, a savior saves something. Take away the act of saving and there is no savior.
3. Is that in the 4th stanza?
4. In the context of the poem it's not likely. Besides it's a question. Questions have answeres. You're assuming the answer is "I can't."
I write poems. I put them on a site called poemranker. Is it poemeranker? Nope. You know why? Because it's a fucking poem. Get over yourself or you remain an ass.
|
|
|
 |
| Re: a comment on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Feb-03/10:24 PM |
2. How is he the savior? If I don't accept it I'm not saved. If there's no sving to be done there is no savior.
3. That's not in the 2nd, 3rd, or 4th... that is what you said.
4. Would you want financial advise from a bum? I wouldn't and in the same way I wouldn't want some one with trouble being happy to try and help me be happy.
Okay, I'll use complete senteces. The word is "poem." There is no "e" at the end. Get it now? If you're going to try to be a smartass make sure you get the smart part down first. Otherwise you simply become an ass.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Feb-03/8:02 PM |
|
Narrow minds associated with homosexuality. There's a new one. Anyway I don't have a narrow mind when it comes to poetry but zero's "I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition'" was prose plain and simple.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on Savior Self by OneFingerAnswer |
2-Feb-03/7:59 PM |
1. Uh oh a typo. God save us all.
2. Jesus is the savior only if you accept the Teachings of Chrisianity. I'm pretty sure he fell once or twice.I mean he was always walking everywhere on dirt roads. I'm sure he causght his foot on a rock or something.
3. When people who are as thin as me get excited or upset they feel their heart beating both on their back and on their ribs. The 4th stanza wasn't even metaphor. It's about as straight foreward as it gets.
4. Are you saying that one can't save him or herself?
Poem. No e. Are you related to VP Dan?
|
|
|
|
| Re: NASA Fireworks by TheDevil |
2-Feb-03/2:49 AM |
|
You do know that you suck at this right?
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
2-Feb-03/2:47 AM |
|
Nice response. I left myself wide open for that one.
|
|
|
|
| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
1-Feb-03/3:41 PM |
|
I believe I'd rather read a hundred mind numbingly cliche poems about love than one peice of prose presented as a poem. Before you start defining what diffferent styles of poems are perhaps you should learn what a poem is in the general sense.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Kaolin Fire is SHIT by poemwanker |
1-Feb-03/3:16 PM |
|
I never get people who go to a site just to complain that they don't like it. I'm thinking that if you don't like something you should avoid it.
|
|
|
|
| Re: American Idol epiphany in haiku by Shardik |
1-Feb-03/3:14 PM |
|
Moses was in Egypt. lol Just kidding. I like it.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on **The Therapist** by scitz |
13-Jan-03/2:01 PM |
|
I agree. Good idea but the poem's not quite right.
|
|
|
|
| Re: Fuck the system by which we live by Lucifer |
13-Jan-03/1:53 PM |
|
I guess I have no sense of humor cause I didn't find these forced rhymes and middle school jokes combined in a mess of bad poetry funny. Oh well. By the way if you're going to say fuck then just say it.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on The Abyss of myself by ciantu |
24-Nov-02/10:13 PM |
|
|
|
| Re: Sweet and Sour by debased |
24-Nov-02/10:10 PM |
|
|
|
| Re: Goodbye by Nicholas Jones |
24-Nov-02/10:06 PM |
Line 19, "and my keep my dreams within it"... is that supposed to read, "and keep my dreams within it" ?
9.
|
|
|
|
| Re: The Epitaph by vulcan |
24-Nov-02/9:55 PM |
|
With all those big words, I was going to ask "Did someone find a dictionary?" but then I noticed they aren't used right or even all spelled right. (Tuberculosis)
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on calendared by cobalt |
24-Sep-02/3:19 PM |
|
Role Playing Game, if that is the rpg DreamMachine was refering to. Games such as Final Fantasy.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on Unveiled by aperfecttool77 |
24-Sep-02/9:18 AM |
god'swife your welcome and I thank you too. As for the bees, now that I know their source they make perfect sense and I thought discussion of them was as dead as they are. Back to people being able to call art/poetry good or bad, An individual can say that a piece of work is bad in their eyes but they cannot tell me how it looks through my eyes.
If many people like it then maybe the artist/poet did something right or maybe they just played puppet to the audience and wrote something simple for the simple minds. If no one likes it maybe they simply need to die before any credit can be given for their greatness or maybe they just suck. Either way the former will get money and fame (or maybe just a bunch of 10's) and the latter will starve or find a day job. The audiance maybe right or wrong but in the end they are still the jury.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on Unveiled by aperfecttool77 |
24-Sep-02/12:19 AM |
|
Expression in this format is poetry though. A wall well painted is not art but there has been an artist who painted black squares on a black canvas and it recieved acclaim as a great piece of art. I found it to be bad but I couldn't deny that it was art.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on Unveiled by aperfecttool77 |
24-Sep-02/12:12 AM |
|
I see a style to it. He repeats a single line then puts a twist on it at the end. Once again, you're mistaking your dislike of something for it's lack. Just because you don't like the style he used doesn't mean it's not there.
|
|
|
|
| Re: a comment on Unveiled by aperfecttool77 |
24-Sep-02/12:06 AM |
|
They can say it's not good art. You can say it's not a good poem. That is where your power ends.
|
|
|
|
