| Re: Tunder by Bakar |
10-Jul-02/9:36 PM |
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If that is a real "friend" of yours I hope he chokes you to death upon seeing this poem. The last stanza is racist crap. In case you couldn't tell I gave you the 0.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Jul-02/1:01 AM |
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I wasn't asking for unlimited poems per week. That sounds absurd to me too. I just wanted to add one more actually. I guess my real problem was that I didn't see anything about the limit until I tried to put another one on. Maybe I missed it. I don't know.
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| Re: recent submissions by <~> |
1-Aug-02/8:38 PM |
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| Re: -=Dark_Angel=- & The Canon Episcopi by Bachus |
9-Aug-02/12:14 PM |
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Great poem. That's if you're in middle school and still enjoy bickering. I hope you two kiss and make up at some point.
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| Re: suicide by durk |
9-Aug-02/12:18 PM |
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Point taken and sentiment shared. Parts of the poem just seem too much like prose though. Great message, decent poem.
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| Re: suicide by durk |
9-Aug-02/12:20 PM |
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(My poem "Jeff" is about suicide too if you'd like to read and comment.)
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9-Aug-02/12:24 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
9-Aug-02/12:28 PM |
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Great images, fuzzy picture.
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| Re: Innsmouth by razorgrin |
9-Aug-02/12:42 PM |
Please comment about poems not people. (As a side note, if you are going to comment about others and make fun of their spelling please get a simple word like Canada right.)
Razorgrin I like the poem and I am familiar with the works of H.P. Lovecraft and Brian Lumley. The adventures of Titus Crow and the Cthulhu Mythos are great reads. Nice work.
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11-Aug-02/5:39 PM |
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Nice story line and well worded in some parts. Other parts seem to have weaker wording and I don't get the irregular capitalizations. 7
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| Re: Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul |
12-Aug-02/9:45 PM |
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I don't really see this as a lyrical poem but maybe I just missed the rhythm. Other than that I found it a nice poem.
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| Re: summer by itchiwitch |
12-Aug-02/9:49 PM |
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Those last lines can be a pain in the ass.
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| Re: Winged Beauty by ThoughtfulSoul |
12-Aug-02/10:03 PM |
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Poetandknowit sounds like a cranky arse to me. While I agree there are some poems that are not great here, yours deserves no such insults. It shows effort which is more than can be said for others.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Aug-02/10:08 PM |
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It's nice but it's not poetry. I don't care what you call it. Just because prose is broken up into lines and stanzas that doesn't mean that it's a poem.
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| Re: untitled #2 by darby pyn |
8-Sep-02/8:54 PM |
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Good job. (Check for typos though)
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| Re: the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi |
12-Sep-02/12:06 AM |
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I happened to like it. Pay no attention to them.
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| Re: one childless girl by mallory180 |
22-Sep-02/2:06 PM |
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:( Reminds me of a friend of mine. (See "Whisper Under the Thunder") 10.
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| Re: For You by aperfecttool77 |
22-Sep-02/10:54 PM |
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[thumbsup] Good job. Glad you finally got in buddy.
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| Re: Hearts End by grrund |
23-Sep-02/8:55 PM |
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I don't get it. It seems like you wanted to be morbid but then there's the Zoom, Varoom, and Booms. Even if you were going for contrast I think they spoiled the mood. If they were simply to signify the car then I still don't like them. Other than that I like but they ruined it just enough for me that the 8 falls to a 5.
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| Re: Twilight by grrund |
23-Sep-02/8:58 PM |
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