on Midnight Madness by Redfin
9 Jul 2002, 11:55 PM
I like it. Nice description. I tkind of describes how I feel after I've been up too long (although that's usually 9 or 10 AM instead of midnight.) Good work.
on Dear Dad by liquidlama
9 Jul 2002, 11:59 PM
Good use of words but WOW. I hope you guys can get things together.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2002, 12:00 AM
lol I usually like poems I understand but that was funny as hell.
on Impermanence by Corey McHattan
10 Jul 2002, 12:03 AM
"A headstone cold, and flowers bright,
Both decaying..."
That's actually something I've noticed before. I think you wrote a good poem here.
Both decaying..."
That's actually something I've noticed before. I think you wrote a good poem here.
on A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin
9 Jul 2002, 7:28 PM
I like it. Good job and I hope you two are happy.
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 8:05 PM
I like it but I find it a bit depressing. It's like saying things suck now but soon they'll be great. I can't help but imagine you talking to a sick child as you say these things.
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 8:08 PM
Family problems?
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Jul 2002, 8:12 PM
Ok that one isn't even funny.
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Jul 2002, 8:14 PM
Ugh. Why is AIDS funny to you?
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 8:25 PM
I like this one a lot.
on To the Sea by timfowler
9 Jul 2002, 8:41 PM
As you already know, Dark Angel is an idiot. Good job.