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Midnight Madness (Free verse) by Redfin Midnight madness all around, yet there's no sound.
Energy flowing through the air and no one there.
Vibrating colors circling my eyes,
Midnight madness on the rise!
Reflecting darkness of moonless nights,
Trembling with a force that shatters the light.
Sensitive winds that stir my mind
Whispers echo's lost in time.
Only memories and madness left behind
And nothing left to find.
Up the ladder:
The Heros
Down the ladder:
fling
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Posted: July 8, 2002 2:26 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 2:26 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.100853 Overall Rank: 6031 Comments:
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OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.11.3
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9-Jul-02/11:55 PM
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I like it. Nice description. I tkind of describes how I feel after I've been up too long (although that's usually 9 or 10 AM instead of midnight.) Good work.
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