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Tunder

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jul 2002 · 6 comments

My friend his name is timothy i call him timotae his last name is thunder i call him timotae tunder he is native and during gym he passes me a bottle of cooking wine drink he says it is good have some chew he makes me laugh but who can take him seriously he is after all a native

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6 comments

[3] deleted user 10-Jul-02/8:09 PM Reply

I dont get it.

[8] lynnstratton 10-Jul-02/8:35 PM Reply

I really like this

[7] kissmeufool58 10-Jul-02/8:35 PM Reply

hey not bad:)

[0] OneFingerAnswer 10-Jul-02/9:36 PM Reply

If that is a real "friend" of yours I hope he chokes you to death upon seeing this poem. The last stanza is racist crap. In case you couldn't tell I gave you the 0.

[8] horus8 1-Aug-02/12:02 AM Reply

they were here first, bur we killed the buffalo and were responsible for ghost dance,

[5] ChaseValentine 27-Apr-05/2:37 PM Reply

A native what? American? Is the last stanza supposed to be ironic?

There are subtle touches to this that I like, but they don't go anywhere at all.