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Tunder (Free verse) by Bakar

My friend his name is timothy i call him timotae his last name is thunder i call him timotae tunder he is native and during gym he passes me a bottle of cooking wine drink he says it is good have some chew he makes me laugh but who can take him seriously he is after all a native

OneFingerAnswer 10-Jul-02/9:36 PM
If that is a real "friend" of yours I hope he chokes you to death upon seeing this poem. The last stanza is racist crap. In case you couldn't tell I gave you the 0.




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