Re: 18 by mikejedw	13-Jan-03/9:43 AM
chilly. very nicely done!
Re: When she beats me by Win	13-Jan-03/9:42 AM
decnt poem, could possibly use more concise images.
Re: Nature's Artistry by Quarton	13-Jan-03/9:40 AM
Consider it a clash of styles, but it seems like you've used a lot of words to say very little.
Re: not even soup by <~>	13-Jan-03/9:38 AM
sent to bed with no dinner, eh? staring out the window? this speaks to me that way. nicely done!
Re: haiku 1 by Crakyamuni	13-Jan-03/9:30 AM
intersting commentary. I like how it feels like a game of pick-up sticks--powerful words thrown together--touching each other with a mix of order and chaos.
Re: Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man	13-Jan-03/9:26 AM
I am terminally confused. What exactly does it mean to hae "pulled"? It seems like it may be something sinister and remarkably Andrew Dice Clay oriented. I cannot give this a high score.
Re: The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar	8-Jan-03/9:56 AM
masengil.
Re: Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman	8-Jan-03/9:53 AM
planning on being "born again" are we? how christian of you!
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	8-Jan-03/9:50 AM
groovy. a bit wordy for a haiku, eh?
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	8-Jan-03/9:49 AM
groovy.
Re: Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman	8-Jan-03/9:48 AM
Are you my cousin? we should get married. I suspect the only thing truly molested here is the art from of Haiku.
Re: The Politics of Fashion by bondjedi	8-Jan-03/9:46 AM
nobody watches that anyways.
Re: Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom	8-Jan-03/9:44 AM
at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.
Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II	8-Jan-03/9:42 AM
Something on your mind?
Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II	8-Jan-03/9:40 AM
Something on your mind?
Re: and the professor, too by bondjedi	8-Jan-03/9:40 AM
5-7-7? why not throw in the gorilla or the astronaut, too? I was listening to mu coconut radio the other day and I heard this song about a chicken and a ostrich in love. It may have been country western--they are like that somethimes. anyways, I was trying to get rescued by reversing the radio signal on my radio and I broke it, getting coconut cream all over my shorts. Thabnks alot for reminding me to take my shorts to the lagoon for a washing. Nice Hat. Why didn't THEIR clothes ever rip or get dirty? I'm just glad I have a coconut computer. Perhaps "lovey and her man" for the last line would be better, however shamelessly unpoetic.
Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom	8-Jan-03/9:33 AM
how cold. excellent.
Re: that time my friend slipped me a speedball by unknown	8-Jan-03/9:32 AM
FanTAStic alliteration.
Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit	8-Jan-03/9:29 AM
nothing personal, but I always belive that the word "just" is unnecessary in most writing. every word should count.
Re: infection of birth by T'ien	8-Jan-03/9:22 AM
to eat to drink to be merry... "Beer is proof that God Loves Man" - Ben Franklin that guy in the Green Mile was infected with life, too. the words are nice, but perhaps this "haiku" should've been infected with line breaks. Stiil I give it an 8.