on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
27 Apr 2003, 1:30 PM
lol.
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
27 Apr 2003, 1:22 PM
Petals crack, dust dry.
An arid earth wets its lips.
Beautiful last time.
An arid earth wets its lips.
Beautiful last time.
on Dumbfounded, dumbfucked by Bane
26 Apr 2003, 3:43 PM
The title's dumb, the rest is chipper.
on Scarlet Bridge by marvelis
26 Apr 2003, 3:39 PM
You forgot a period, and spelled revenge wrong. Unless you are a pirate then it's Arghgggg REvanGE is mine me harty!
on PLAYMOBIL by Garrett S Sexton
26 Apr 2003, 3:34 PM
Tidy.
on my so called life by nolan
26 Apr 2003, 3:29 PM
Whatever Corky.
on Im innocent by Horus9
26 Apr 2003, 3:23 PM
I would go grab a couple of my Good Robert Frost collections of poetry and fire some off at you, but I've already been vomiting all night. Besides, I haven't the slightest clue as to what or who in the fuck you are talking about in the slightest. Good day, SIR!
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
25 Apr 2003, 2:28 PM
"hard race." would be better as 'embrace' because well, what in the fuck does confusion and love have to do with racing. There is no race, that's an illusion better left to children that race themselves.
on Shiva the Restorer by bunniesnangels
25 Apr 2003, 1:16 PM
Sliders vs. a sale on menudo cd's. Hmmm. Clean up in isle 666.
replying on Lost and found by INTRANSIT
22 Apr 2003, 12:10 AM
it's obviously testicular cancer in remission, daft.
on dancing to be flowers by richa
22 Apr 2003, 12:05 AM
Yes, obtuse (one of those words we all learn in math and toss around later at frat parties as a sign of intelligence and breeding ability) but know, look it up. this poem is hardly obtuse. Scattered, symbolically riddled and a bit cryptic (just a tad) but not obtuse. Nice cleavage by the way, i pulled a load off to um last night and lost not a beed to bargain.
replying on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
21 Apr 2003, 11:59 PM
you would be so lucky to as have gestated at some point in the past, but I predict it more for you as a future event.
replying on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
21 Apr 2003, 11:57 PM
VIRUS U TWIT. how on earth do you expect a reader to take your comment seriously if out the gate you're legless. Good god. Viruses and bacteria are night and day man. It's like you just described godzilla to a japanese kid as a green prehistoric chilidog that hates big monkeys.
on Changes by CHRMEcountryGRL
21 Apr 2003, 11:47 PM
Word up chitlin!
on Is it just a word by CHRMEcountryGRL
21 Apr 2003, 11:44 PM
Okey dokey. you go coda chrome. go like kitty to yarn, and i'm going to go to the head now. (give yourself another ten for nailing it!)
on Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL
21 Apr 2003, 11:40 PM
Noone really knows what concrete or dada poetry is.
By someone who does.
By someone who does.
replying on the game by princesszoe
21 Apr 2003, 11:38 PM
Honestly if I thought there was hope I would offer. Sorry if I s(ee)m vague or ru(d)e.
great poem. GQTip awarde.