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Neckbrake (Free verse) by Figure 8
Eat me, Fly up my legs in a fat fast flurry, breathing that breath of stifled male heady undercurrents. Love me fast. All fury, all death and heartfelt cries and my eyes are blind shut. Sealed against the opinions of the narrow thought streams. Undercut me. Slice below the ankles I drop. Plummet from grace, dark freefall, headlong neck brake in the dark of your want.

Up the ladder: The Bleeding Rose
Down the ladder: Regrets

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.75
Weighted score: 5.2086053
Overall Rank: 4444
Posted: April 27, 2003 1:23 PM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2003 1:23 PM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Apr-03/1:29 PM | Reply
Nice triple lux.
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