| Re: Its Blue by aurora |
2-Jul-03/5:29 PM |
It Glue (Gluekue) by Caught at the pump
Wow man... That good glue
Will you light my balls on fire
Do it for the Sky!
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| Re: Teen Hardcore by Johnnie Baptiste |
2-Jul-03/10:47 AM |
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You are SO! imaginitively vague & aloofa. Perhaps try Xraying your scrotum a 1000 times a day for added appeal.
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| Re: Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus |
1-Jul-03/1:33 PM |
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This is by far one of your best, I would lose that "people move away" entirely, and end with a period after "things change".
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| Re: Good prevails by DeadtotheWorld |
1-Jul-03/1:29 PM |
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Jesus, right when I think your poetry has hit rock fucking moist stinky lightless bottom, you holler out "China or bust", and start digging again. Amazing.
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| Re: Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
1-Jul-03/1:20 PM |
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Why would you put that last paragraph in? Are you so insecure you need to explain yourself explaining yoursef? Good God, it was fine up until that stab at humor.
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| Re: your great by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/12:26 PM |
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| Re: 9/2/2003 by cpill |
1-Jul-03/12:24 PM |
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| Re: he's so good looking by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/12:17 PM |
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You sound straight to me.
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| Re: Apparently you missed the Memo by Luzr |
1-Jul-03/12:07 PM |
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Here's a quote from White knuckled Phillip "Shut the fuck up & pass me the ketchup you pretentious twat". Because, honestly, What then? What the fuck should this do? Motivate me to read more highschool mandatory staple boring crud? Because, in case you hadn't noticed a legless armless shrapnel disembowled uneducated child in a third world war riddled country can't eat an Oscar Wilde qoute for sustenance or wrap themselves up in a warm Will Durant for the night can they idiot? Nobody gives a frozen-fuck about how informed you assume that you are, shut the fuck up and go make yourself another hero sandwich you fucking sorry piece of shit..
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| Re: a comment on Love by horus8 |
1-Jul-03/10:43 AM |
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| Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck |
30-Jun-03/4:50 PM |
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Dude, I love you, you beat me to it.
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| Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck |
30-Jun-03/2:30 PM |
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JEFF GOLDBLOOM TELEPORTING IN A NEW MOVIE CALLED "THE FLY PART FOUR".
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| Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck |
30-Jun-03/2:28 PM |
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| Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck |
30-Jun-03/2:27 PM |
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| Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck |
30-Jun-03/2:21 PM |
And it doesn't say anything? What are you blind? Because, I believe it says a lot.
1) For one, it's a new form of dada poetry entirely that this beautiful young man created in his mind as easily as it takes you to eat a gallon of ice cream.
2)It clearly says he's lonely, horny, stoned, bored, observant and artistic, not to mention getting a free show.
3)Uses words to not only create an entirely new way of using poetry as art, but does it with more humor then you could muster up from another lonely night of eating fritos and watching three's company, again.
4)Proves to the world that you have yet to have a real orgasm, so quick faking it bitch and go finger bang yourself 'till you piss and collapse please, now! Get!
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| Re: a comment on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck |
30-Jun-03/2:14 PM |
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Don't lash out at joyluck just because you're a guilt stricken jealous Asian whore.
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| Re: Obsidian Reflection by SupremeDreamer |
30-Jun-03/2:12 PM |
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pudendom, lol. Good, much better, you've taken some risks here and I did see an imaginitive improvement. It still shit, but I chuckled quite a bit and that's big in my little world "Named Dreamer Supreme". lol, you crack me up, here's an eight so skate. You're lucky I'm performing this eve and I'm giddy.
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| Re: Have you by XangryXblondeX |
29-Jun-03/6:53 PM |
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Have you ever beaten yourself unrecognizable with a poorly strung tennise racket?
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| Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
29-Jun-03/5:20 PM |
Because in the real world that wouldn't happen, and in a imaginary world it would be considered unimaginatively boring, unorganic as far as the story goes, and irrelevant first off. Secondly, it's not my style, I tailored it to you. If it was mine, it wouldn't be posted because it has NO focus, no center. What you've done here is invented something better left to lie around longer in the hopes of being put to better use than that.
1) It's horrendously long.
2) has the shape of pigeon shit on a slow moving vehicle.
3) Attempts wildly to be cool and different, but insteads winds up cold and humorless.
4) Starts off at something worth writing about & ends up at something not worth reading entirely. Muwahhaha or not.
5) Writing is an exercise in communicating specific ideas. not to listen to yourself be unspecific
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| Re: a comment on Herne by OneFingerAnswer |
29-Jun-03/5:08 PM |
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Oh, I see, well if it makes you feel better. My love life has been in the shitter, before I even knew where the shitter was. I'm fucking cursed. I hate this spinning mound of puppy planet. An I wish only for a polar shift of the mightiest porportions, and soon.
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