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Love (Ode) by horus8
You have no identity.
So just go along.
Assume their prosperity
Will let you belong.
I loved you for all
that I could not be
Loyal and honest,
but still you won't see.
Right from the start
I laid it all out
Until death do us part,
and no more abouts.
The way that we differed
personality wise.
You'll never concure
Only bait then despise.
I guess that our love
was a sitcom to you.
A fingerless glove
that was never brand new.
And what of our son?
When he sees you parade?
Around in that stupor,
like you've been betrayed.
I am sorry they hurt you,
but the raped can survive.
All that we've been through,
Still you are not alive.
I wanted to breathe life.
To daylight your fresh bloom.
Such a well behaved wife.
A warlock's blessed loom.
You accepted my past.
I equipped you with worth.
Your first's turned my last
Love's gift & its curse.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 6.0965877
Overall Rank: 1146
Posted: June 29, 2003 5:00 PM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2003 5:00 PM PDT
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