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Love (Ode) by horus8
You have no identity. So just go along. Assume their prosperity Will let you belong. I loved you for all that I could not be Loyal and honest, but still you won't see. Right from the start I laid it all out Until death do us part, and no more abouts. The way that we differed personality wise. You'll never concure Only bait then despise. I guess that our love was a sitcom to you. A fingerless glove that was never brand new. And what of our son? When he sees you parade? Around in that stupor, like you've been betrayed. I am sorry they hurt you, but the raped can survive. All that we've been through, Still you are not alive. I wanted to breathe life. To daylight your fresh bloom. Such a well behaved wife. A warlock's blessed loom. You accepted my past. I equipped you with worth. Your first's turned my last Love's gift & its curse.

Up the ladder: Daddy

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 6.0965877
Overall Rank: 1146
Posted: June 29, 2003 5:00 PM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2003 5:00 PM PDT
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[n/a] TanHand @ 63.214.87.49 | 29-Jun-03/6:52 PM | Reply
POWDERED SUGAR IS 5% CORN STARCH TO PREVENT CLUMPING
[1] wCUNTw @ 195.157.153.253 | 1-Jul-03/4:04 AM | Reply
Go fuck a hairy antelope
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > wCUNTw | 1-Jul-03/10:43 AM | Reply
You offering? LOL!
[7] spank me baby yeah @ 62.105.116.77 | 4-Jul-03/9:27 AM | Reply
Upbeat for once, fucking hell HORUS, by the way ...7.

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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > spank me baby yeah | 4-Jul-03/11:48 AM | Reply
Haa Haa Ha ah...? What the fuck are you chirpin' about?

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