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20 most recent comments by horus8 (861-880) and replies

Re: Love till you hate by NNirvana13666 21-Aug-03/1:23 PM
That's tempting my devil fork.
Re: a comment on How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer 21-Aug-03/1:04 PM
I'd say. Ha ha ha, are you saying YOU ARE INTO MURDER?

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Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa 21-Aug-03/1:01 PM
All the better reason to fuck.
Re: quarter-step (abridged) by richa 21-Aug-03/11:59 AM
You are old, but hey, I'd fuck you.
Re: You and I by Nirvana13666 21-Aug-03/11:47 AM
Sometimes, I think back on when I lost it all, again, for the 100th time, and I laugh hysterically until I pop out from behind it all, and say "surprise" with a mindset for murder.

Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.
Re: Blind Sight by Nirvana13666 21-Aug-03/11:38 AM
Much better.
Re: super-power by Nirvana13666 21-Aug-03/11:35 AM
Maybe they read this poem and were stupifed.
Re: faulty fate by Nirvana13666 21-Aug-03/11:30 AM
Sounds like you need to condense this into a fortune cookie and sit on it for another ten weeks.
Re: How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer 21-Aug-03/11:20 AM
It was good up to the point where you had to deliver the 'message'. Then it was a yawn.
Here are two facts.

1. A man with three kids never hops out of a toyota,
he slowly slides.

2. A man that dreams of murder? Does not love or stay with a cheating whore. He moves on to his dreams, and better things... Like MURDERING.
Re: a comment on When Fairy Tales Forgive Us by J.B. Manning 21-Aug-03/11:11 AM
You should let me show you how to improve this.
Re: a comment on Wolverines, me, and the last American Buffalo. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 21-Aug-03/11:00 AM
That depends on the direction of my bunny ears.
Re: For Bo dEric, A poology (Stoid) by Jeremi Sliveraldo LOMGODO by <{Baba^Yaga}> 19-Aug-03/9:57 AM
Baba, you should of wrote my name down your shaft. For Eric and Liver! May your Mammary live on.
Re: a comment on Breaking the wind (An Odenelle to Pirgaytes) by Bachus 19-Aug-03/9:55 AM
Either that, or I wrote what I felt from the inner most shelfs of my hart. Care for a toot?
Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/6:18 PM
Turn on your black light.
Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/6:16 PM
I want you to kill me. Give yourelf a chrystal meth enima, red eye a flight out, and do me dead with a burnt bent smack spoon... Please, kill me.
Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/5:34 PM
Yes and yes. B======D---------

I'm a straight shooter.
Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/3:06 PM
Wheel, you're still a pup. Your time will coma.
Re: A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/3:04 PM
Oh lordy someone gave me a zero. Darnit, that was poopy of them P{> (I am a pirate with an whitey powered eye patch) lol.
Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/2:59 PM
IN EHR..AQ. lol, get it?
Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18-Aug-03/2:58 PM
COME ON!!!!!!! LIVE MAN! LIVE! IT'S FUCKING MURDER! AND IT'S FUCKING FREE!!!!!! FREE! DON'T YOU FEEL THE FREE LOVE!? IN MURDERING.


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