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You and I (Free verse) by Nirvana13666 I can hear your voice through the photograph
So distant yet I hear you whispering in my ear
Impatient to see you
My eyes are blinded by anticipation
I am lost without you yet confused with you
How can my path be so clear then?
Holding your heart in my cupped hands makes me anxious
I am afraid to lose your love through the trickling blood
Who am I without you?
Nothing strong enough to last
Nothing simple enough to make sense
I know us to be soul mates drifting in shifting parallel time
Continuous love vested in faith in our fate
That is why together we find our perfect place.
Up the ladder:
twilight
Down the ladder:
super-power
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Posted: August 21, 2003 8:56 AM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 8:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.904638 Overall Rank: 9828 Comments:
moosh.. im melting.. cmon now, can you put a new spin on this love shit? give it some sparkle? make it dance? something like that? i feel cheated charlie.. i want my money back.
Nothing strong enough to last ibogaine can last upto 3 days.. is that strong enough? blessed with 6. 158 view(s)
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Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.