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You and I (Free verse) by Nirvana13666

I can hear your voice through the photograph So distant yet I hear you whispering in my ear Impatient to see you My eyes are blinded by anticipation I am lost without you yet confused with you How can my path be so clear then? Holding your heart in my cupped hands makes me anxious I am afraid to lose your love through the trickling blood Who am I without you? Nothing strong enough to last Nothing simple enough to make sense I know us to be soul mates drifting in shifting parallel time Continuous love vested in faith in our fate That is why together we find our perfect place.

horus8 21-Aug-03/11:47 AM
Sometimes, I think back on when I lost it all, again, for the 100th time, and I laugh hysterically until I pop out from behind it all, and say "surprise" with a mindset for murder.

Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.




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