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You and I (Free verse) by Nirvana13666

I can hear your voice through the photograph So distant yet I hear you whispering in my ear Impatient to see you My eyes are blinded by anticipation I am lost without you yet confused with you How can my path be so clear then? Holding your heart in my cupped hands makes me anxious I am afraid to lose your love through the trickling blood Who am I without you? Nothing strong enough to last Nothing simple enough to make sense I know us to be soul mates drifting in shifting parallel time Continuous love vested in faith in our fate That is why together we find our perfect place.

SupremeDreamer 21-Aug-03/1:56 PM
moosh.. im melting.. cmon now, can you put a new spin on this love shit? give it some sparkle? make it dance? something like that? i feel cheated charlie.. i want my money back.

Nothing strong enough to last

ibogaine can last upto 3 days.. is that strong enough?

blessed with 6.




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