| Re: a comment on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8 |
24-Aug-03/1:00 PM |
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Also, everyone has herpes, whether or not they (the herpes) show themselves is a combination of emotional, physical and spiritual stress and the current state of their immune systems response to said outbursts.
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| Re: Candle Lit Night by LuckyJoe |
23-Aug-03/8:00 PM |
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Christ, that was a tuna tube steak in a tuba on the tundra surrounded by tanya harding handrinos.
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| Re: a comment on To My Grave by Bonehiss |
23-Aug-03/5:36 PM |
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I wouldn't kick him out of bed if he was, anyway, but it's not.
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| Re: a comment on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus |
23-Aug-03/7:05 AM |
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Absolutely, it would be my honor.
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| Re: a comment on To Mom by Brittanyy |
22-Aug-03/8:24 PM |
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Let me get this straight. You have two votes a 6 and a 7, which in all due respect should be a 3 and a 4, but me, and my pal the 'dream' were feeling very giving at that moment and empathetic to your obvious state of current retardation. And you are calling us "mean"? Though you're the one that just went upstairs and stabbed yourself due to a lack of communication and self pity. Sweet heart, it is you that is being a bit to hard on yourself. What you've written here is not a poem it is a bloody pair of teenage cotton briefs.
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| Re: a comment on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
22-Aug-03/6:17 PM |
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That's nothing I rhymed Hep C with pepsi last month and broke the moons wind, in half. It was very romantic.
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| Re: a comment on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 |
22-Aug-03/5:24 PM |
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You know for an old woman, you say buddy just like a guy (but gay and jewish with a toupee) with a mouthfull of pennys.
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| Re: Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus |
22-Aug-03/5:03 PM |
From Poseidon, Aphrodite appeared,
Eyes aquamarine, and true as the dawn.
From her virgin flesh all wave horses reared,
As an Ocean bowed when she walked upon.
Immaculate goddess of men's delight,
Embrace me as if I was Hephaestus
After fire pounding steel all day and night.
My mouth to yours, my hands to your discus'.
But my loss serves the will of the sky God
Your uncle loves you enough to kill me.
As the storm brings me down I find it's odd
that love between men and gods cannot be.
My love and my life to you I bequeeth
I am yours out at sea just underneath.
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| Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
22-Aug-03/4:10 PM |
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AN ORIGINAL OBSERVATION! AN ORIGINAL TITLE! The poem however, gave me gas the equivelant of a four day old wet burritto. When you got to the part where the city was in the backdrop, I thought, "wow" he' so poetic. Then I laughed, and went and took a short shit.
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| Re: The Plan by Rilke4ClosetLesbians |
22-Aug-03/4:05 PM |
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Elizabeth Taylor failed miserably.
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| Re: The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz |
22-Aug-03/4:03 PM |
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Feeling okay? Today I auditioned in speedos and when I bent over my hernia popped up my hemhoroid popped over and a baby mouse cried.
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| Re: Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/3:57 PM |
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| Re: What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/3:55 PM |
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Hilarious, as funny as birdman's hero poem easilly.
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| Re: Enantiodromia by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/3:53 PM |
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Bone hiss rocks. Superb poetry.
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| Re: Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus |
22-Aug-03/1:39 PM |
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A really brave attempt. I could edit this.
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| Re: a comment on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8 |
22-Aug-03/1:13 AM |
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According to the most unrecent popular mechanics I could pull out from underneath my drunk great uncle at JPL people that work for the federal government or state government and make between 36,000 and 52,000 dollars a year, and think that they have achieved their corn fed goals? Apparently make quite pleasant lap dogs.
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| Re: a comment on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8 |
22-Aug-03/1:09 AM |
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Wow you're clever, but what does this poem have to do with me or my sister? Do you know my sister? Or me? Or was that some how your way of being bad mannered?
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| Re: Forget it...k? by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/2:58 PM |
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Could you talk more about the opening of legs?
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| Re: To Mom by Brittanyy |
21-Aug-03/2:17 PM |
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| Re: walk out by NNirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/1:25 PM |
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I would end at controlling, and work on shaping your structures.
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