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Love till you hate (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
I am what I believe even if you donât see it in me
Far beyond what you know resembles me
Forbidden from the light by simplicity
Your breath is now cold whenever you speak to me
Your touch gets my body moving in spirals
Your voice erases my thoughts
Speak to me
I want to know without forgetting
Swim with me in blunder
Break me away from your solid heart
You make me lie
You make hate
But I love you
Nothing but irony in my mind
I look and find you beside me
It is a morbid infiltration of my soul
Morbid infiltration of my metal diet
I canât breathe without you
I canât live without you
Love me or let me die
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5634
Posted: August 21, 2003 12:35 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 12:35 PM PDT
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