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Love till you hate (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
I am what I believe even if you don’t see it in me Far beyond what you know resembles me Forbidden from the light by simplicity Your breath is now cold whenever you speak to me Your touch gets my body moving in spirals Your voice erases my thoughts Speak to me I want to know without forgetting Swim with me in blunder Break me away from your solid heart You make me lie You make hate But I love you Nothing but irony in my mind I look and find you beside me It is a morbid infiltration of my soul Morbid infiltration of my metal diet I can’t breathe without you I can’t live without you Love me or let me die

Up the ladder: To PinkBunnyofDoom
Down the ladder: THE 7315

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5633
Posted: August 21, 2003 12:35 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2003 12:35 PM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Aug-03/1:23 PM | Reply
That's tempting my devil fork.
[10] Nirvana13666 @ 205.188.209.14 > horus8 | 22-Aug-03/8:00 AM | Reply
I see you liked this one Horus. What did you like about it?
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