poemranker ::Love till you hate by NNirvana13666

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Free verse № 61686

Love till you hate

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

I am what I believe even if you don’t see it in me Far beyond what you know resembles me Forbidden from the light by simplicity Your breath is now cold whenever you speak to me Your touch gets my body moving in spirals Your voice erases my thoughts Speak to me I want to know without forgetting Swim with me in blunder Break me away from your solid heart You make me lie You make hate But I love you Nothing but irony in my mind I look and find you beside me It is a morbid infiltration of my soul Morbid infiltration of my metal diet I can’t breathe without you I can’t live without you Love me or let me die

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[9] horus8 21-Aug-03/1:23 PM Reply
That's tempting my devil fork.
[10] Nirvana13666 › horus8 22-Aug-03/8:00 AM Reply
I see you liked this one Horus. What did you like about it?