Re: Kept Safe by trev086	20-Dec-02/4:19 PM
take the question marks out, and than unfortunately every word, but two. ~ Trevor Greene. You see trevor, sometimes a blank letter can say so much more. like my mind is blank. use your fucking imagination for the love of a beutifull special young lady could you, please? PLEASE!. thanks, love horus8. p.s merry christmas.
Re: Come Back to Me by jlanza	20-Dec-02/4:14 PM
i should of finger banged you harder, but with my cactus, and a handful of dry mud. three hundred miles? that's not love sweety that's a mild crush. love, is a talking brain tumor and a late cable bill w/ a bit of movie popcorn in your hair..
Re: I have no Idea?...? by brazen	20-Dec-02/4:10 PM
"foozle" sweet. preys gotta go back to pray. "empty acres take up more space then muddled cities", might works better moved to the last stanza. perhaps not, subways scare the hell out of me and so does the sky. usually.m
Re: Curse by OneFingerAnswer	20-Dec-02/4:05 PM
line 9 typo, beautifull and true.??
Re: a comment on "Bored?" "Let's eat my nuts?" by Bachus	20-Dec-02/2:33 PM
consider yourself. flashed. chicky chaw, chicky wicky wahhhwick wik wah.
Re: terrorism and break dancing by w~* ATHENA *~w	20-Dec-02/1:58 PM
kool.atleast it's not t.s eliot. is it? merry christmas and all that other arm funk.
Re: a comment on A christmas thought by keatsImnot	20-Dec-02/1:11 PM
Depart from Me, you evildoers, by Jesu the 2nd. An story that is not an poeme complete with prawne sketches and diagrams you could have powder packets and formulas for enbrowning liquids..the pieces could be shoe horns, beaks, and hoofs...it could be a board game action figure spin off book toy combinations complete with floating pirate ships and aids in a break in case of emergency vial...no wait..I KNOW AIDS PILLS jesus christ this could be huge shhh.
Re: a comment on A christmas thought by keatsImnot	20-Dec-02/1:04 PM
jesus you're right. that is disturbing, but not as disturbing as getting nude right now with johoba oil...lubing down proper, and snorting some tinsel.
Re: a comment on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Dec-02/12:54 PM
self plug? who me? never, i my friend am not a cad.....wait a minute..i am a cad chicky shaw chew chewy wicky chew..shaw wah wah..naw it's just a song a wrote last week nothing big nothing small just another one of my little baby smurfs marching to the beat of a differenr drum, they're purple...you see.
Re: a comment on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8	20-Dec-02/12:21 PM
Subtext is everywhere. Even on toothpaste tubes. Did you ever notice something always goes miserably wrong this time of year repeatedly? i fucking despise the holidays..i'm not going to ruin it for everyone else, but everyone should know that at&t and fingerhut are SATAN SATAN SATAN. that is all i care to say. EVIL EVIL EVIL. would anyone like some peanut brittle?o
Re: Fragment by goldfish	20-Dec-02/10:48 AM
your so intelligent to call this fragment, because it is? pretty though, my problem with poetry like this is that it doesn't lose anything to gain anything...it doesn't take any chances..it's what i would term 'safe' poetry. In other words it wont change the world, but maybe a fragment of the world like the ivory coast? also, because it is missing that last rhyming stanza to push it over the top, you will continue to not get tens, but nines christof. i'm sure some schmuch will come along and be like omg and give it a ten within the next ten minutes, but i feel robbed..totally second placed..wich isn't necessarily bad all the time. i guess.
Re: fa11ing by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/3:07 PM
i enjoyed your sketch work,and the comics. You're quite talented.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:51 AM
karma balance?..okay mr. zen abacus karma police. did you go to the front door or the back, and name one feature about this place that satood out from the houses around it 'twilight zone theme music' beerneenerner. welcome to the karma zone.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:46 AM
easy killer. once again let me 'reiterfy' ha ha (i love mispronouncing shit) holidAYS + nomoney+ miscarriage= heavy on the sauce with a towed vehicle ala-mode..in other words i was in venice beach rrying to figure out where i put my truck, why they moved it (bastards) and where they moved it too. also. i am not pretty, and there is no pool. there's an ocean 15 minutes away.
Re: a comment on UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:38 AM
things happen what can you do? it's fine...she's fine..these things are out of my control, so i just kind of watch it all happen. like when i was a kid and we would go to this chinese restaurant and i would just stare at the fish tank. wondering. wich is wich.
Re: UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/11:08 AM
i wasn't kidding, nor was i trying to be funny. there was a miscarriage, because she was on that shot thing which does something (weaken the lining of the uterus? and the embryo doesn't fasten slides down becomes tubal hemorrages blood, emergency care..vacuuming..half smile guilt no conversation on the way home. SO DON'T FUVCKING TELL ME WHJAT. I MADE A FUCKING COMMENT ABOUT A PIUUECE THAT REMINDED ME OF A SITUATION i went through LASt week called a miscarriage i put it down just because i'm like that. get it it made me think of thast i put it down..i don't need to play fucking mind games with people to get off..get that? i wasn't trying to be fucking funny, so go fuck yourself.
Re: Fact of the Matter by marvelis	19-Dec-02/10:51 AM
do you think if i blow-gunned anna nicole smith while she was holding court to her fucking lawyer and interior designer i could kill them all..i mean..you know with the right wind and timimg?
Re: Time by marvelis	19-Dec-02/10:45 AM
well...if anything..this poem helped me appreciate my coffe a bit more. take a three, and go back to your fucking hobbit riddles. you're about as marvelis as 90210 re-runs hith a midget riding around a saddled bull mastiff naked with a tin foil hat and cap gun. galavanting around my house while a constantly hit rewind play rewind play tookie hat play smookie hey! PLAY BOMBAY! hey! hey hat! HAY! HAY! HAY! fuck.. broke a nail. shit.
Re: no cure by New Life Drug	19-Dec-02/10:38 AM
distasters? the last time i provoked one of those it chased me down the street with a whiffle ball bat, and it was like "ookey wooki chueki chew..chewy chick chick wa wicky chew." and you know what i did? i happily wept and ran for my life. tsk. and please don't smash the cloud. thanks.
Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub	19-Dec-02/10:33 AM
fomented? formented. and you guys call me paranoid. tsk.