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Holding On

by Katie2

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

Through times that where filled of love, through the darkness of the moonless night, thought the hottest of sun rises on a summers horizon, we hold on. Through the fights that killed us, we where born again, our lives where being held in a murders hand, through the shaft of his gun, we haven't lost, but still haven't won, we held on. Through the flood that kicked us down, to the ring that we are now bound, to the kids that have past through the walls of my virginity, to forever, and eternity memories of a tragic past, are locked away and fading, the day's of my broken heart, have long been forgotten, our love will always linger on, even when out souls are gone...forever holding on.

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[5] <~> 18-Dec-02/8:22 AM Reply
line breaks, babycakes!
[5] Caducus 18-Dec-02/9:10 AM Reply
Littered with bad grammar and spelling mistakes which sadly loses the reader from enjoying your work, flow interuption pisses people off on here, welcome to poemranker katie 2, help us to help ourselves this is the literary last supper for poets.
(re-edit and re-submit this and good luck on here.
[5] horus8 19-Dec-02/10:20 AM Reply
the shaft of his gun? Are you fucking high? "to the kids that have past through the walls of my virginity"? hahah the flood that kicked us down...its like hallmark on bad acid naked and duct taped to the new humvee with seth green and his posse driving you around while the backstreet boys make sweet love to the back of your backwards baseball cap. you should be rubber banded to death. patti smith should give you a left handed wedgie.