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Holding On (Free verse) by Katie2

Through times that where filled of love, through the darkness of the moonless night, thought the hottest of sun rises on a summers horizon, we hold on. Through the fights that killed us, we where born again, our lives where being held in a murders hand, through the shaft of his gun, we haven't lost, but still haven't won, we held on. Through the flood that kicked us down, to the ring that we are now bound, to the kids that have past through the walls of my virginity, to forever, and eternity memories of a tragic past, are locked away and fading, the day's of my broken heart, have long been forgotten, our love will always linger on, even when out souls are gone...forever holding on.

horus8 19-Dec-02/10:20 AM
the shaft of his gun? Are you fucking high? "to the kids that have past through the walls of my virginity"? hahah the flood that kicked us down...its like hallmark on bad acid naked and duct taped to the new humvee with seth green and his posse driving you around while the backstreet boys make sweet love to the back of your backwards baseball cap. you should be rubber banded to death. patti smith should give you a left handed wedgie.




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