| Re: Your Heart is my Heaven by Free2Rhyme15 |
22-Jul-03/9:06 PM |
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"diffcult" typo, and there are some gramatical errors. "she pasted away" this made me grin naturally. I'd fix that if I were you, but the sentiment felt honest and pure enough. 6.
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| Re: first letter level by http://findingwater |
22-Jul-03/9:26 PM |
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| Re: the preacher and the poet by http://findingwater |
22-Jul-03/9:29 PM |
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The poet? Never, full of caviar maybe and themselves.
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| Re: Tomorrow by jude |
22-Jul-03/11:55 PM |
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| Re: The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer |
23-Jul-03/12:02 AM |
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"The pedals of love" Best line ever! What a bike! Dark Bagel once said to me "You must be one of those uncompromising street poetes" You can have that title now. lol. I'm done with it. When i was in prison there was the guard that would wake us up in the middle of the night like it was an emergency... Then he would laugh and start flexing like a boddy building WWF steroid monkey. We called him the python man. What a waste of mashed potatos that bastard was. I never got any sleep.
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| Re: I am the gayest by walrus8 |
23-Jul-03/12:05 AM |
Top twenty poems
poem style avg # authormissing timeFree verse 7.14 49Bill Z. BubBlue Sky Diner, Thursday NightFree verse 7.00 30<~>Gamma Ray MachineFree verse 6.97 40god'swifefixin' - a tale of woeFree verse 6.93 14hipster flareFalling AsleepLyric 6.88 14MiggyExtra Strength TylenolFree verse 6.86 35DurtKLInstructions to a SculptorFree verse 6.86 83ChristofBread & OrangesFree verse 6.84 37god'swifeI am the gayestOde 6.83 9-=Dark__Angel=-The BloodingFree verse 6.79 71Mr PigThe Wooden Armchair Of Similar DreamsFree verse 6.78 14CaducusThe Order Of ThingsFree verse 6.77 30Mr Pigi will not come to bangladeshFree verse 6.75 23lost in americaSome ThingsFree verse 6.75 10ChristofFamily PortraitFree verse 6.75 18Mr PigGoodbyeFree verse 6.75 18Sunshine ConkeyWatching My Childhood VanishFree verse 6.74 13CaducusDamaged By 'Weakness'Other 6.74 22Mr PigThe Last Words She SaidFree verse 6.73 56CaducusThe GentlemanFree verse 6.68 57-=Dark_Angel=-
And then some.
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23-Jul-03/12:16 AM |
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Line 14 typo, other than that, charming.
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23-Jul-03/12:19 AM |
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One flew over the lark's nest.
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| Re: Feasting Ouroboros by <~> |
24-Jul-03/12:49 PM |
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It's great, I'm just of the opinion Bangladesh is a shit hole. Both realistically and metaphorically. Perhaps Katmandu?
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24-Jul-03/12:53 PM |
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What's the #1 magician rule? Feed your fucking rabbit lest it die and poo on your do, mid act climax.
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| Re: I'm gonna fuck you! by King Abdullah I |
24-Jul-03/1:26 PM |
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This title will bring them in, to be sadly dissapointed, like I inevitably will be either way.
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| Re: I have reinvented the haiku and made it my own, becoming the world's first haiku gangsta in the process so you all had better just get it over with and give this 'ku a big fat TEN? by bondjedi |
24-Jul-03/1:29 PM |
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| Re: Mastermind by wOrnella Mutiw |
24-Jul-03/1:37 PM |
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Hi, my name is horus8, you must be, Stupid. It has been a pleasure, but in the end I believe we all know who the true mastermind was, and in the words of Alexander the Great " All that way for this <wipes his sword of blood>...Oh, well, I suppose We're rich now, let's eat."
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24-Jul-03/1:40 PM |
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Perching is always a highlight in my day.
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| Re: A Fine Day To Exit by OnTheOtherHand |
24-Jul-03/1:43 PM |
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Fear, is what they made it to be, not you. Let the boy out to play. Vitamin D, is God's juice man, it will work.
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| Re: Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof |
24-Jul-03/1:47 PM |
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Always the observant one aren't we.
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24-Jul-03/2:02 PM |
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Only if you're grinding your trucks in a pool in La Hoya with Christian Hosoi.
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| Re: Ranting Drunkard by Don-Quixote |
24-Jul-03/2:05 PM |
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Good lord, Try Absynthe and quit moanin'. A poet chirping about drinking... what are you? from Salt lake city?
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| Re: Two sides of Broken trust by DeadtotheWorld |
25-Jul-03/9:32 PM |
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Oh lord, I better put my galoshes on, it's getting deep in here.
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| Re: death of devil XIII by crwncka1 |
25-Jul-03/9:36 PM |
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And to think my sherbert melted a bit to read this nonsense.
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