Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	21-Jul-03/12:09 PM
Well, one thing for sure, you sure know how to cater your pieces to the best list! Next, perhaps, do one on the struggles of the neanderthal before they were exterminated, or, how about the chinese in California? Sure, then, you could occupy every single slot on the top poemranker countdown along with the rest of the poet hacks. ten movies a year come out in the jewish controled movie industry telling this same story a million times better over and over again. Yet, do they, 'the jews' take the time to explore other races struggles? No, not in the least, because they only give a fuck about themselves. Oh, hey lets do another tired movie on world war two? what about the palestinians? What about the genocides in Africa or south America, sweat shops, child labor, but no, another fucking Jewish blee on jewish blow blee blah blue. Whatever. Jews only look after themselves, and I'm fucking sick of it, I'm not saying the nazis were right or that the Jews didn't suffer, but I can name thousands of shit (currentevents) that's just as important to be aware of get lost underneath the much more important plight of the Jews (since they own the media)... But alas I'm sure you can add it to your control of the board mr pig, but personally, I thought it was poorly written, and to an average kid into poetry, it's incomprehendible anyway. I hope it goes to #1. Good day.
Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	21-Jul-03/12:23 PM
Oh yeah, and let's not forget the nepotism? God forbid they should give the job to the more qualified recipient instead of their mentally challenged nephew.
Re: Fides by BleedingRose	21-Jul-03/12:31 PM
"thinking"
Re: Portsmouth belle 1 by Garrett S Sexton	21-Jul-03/3:23 PM
I've always been amazed at all of the imaginitive things that a little boy can do with a proper rubber ducky in the tub.
Re: waiting in my own way by rockinindividual	21-Jul-03/4:09 PM
Kept my interest, and was well... cute, young and dramatically crushish, maybe if you could send me a shout of you in some cotton briefs back lit by purple candles with a short tight white tank top on nipples pushing through, black rose in your teeth, bach ringing through the air LEEEE DEE DA LA DEEE LEEEE DA LA DA LE DE WEWWWWWWWWWWEWWWWWWWEEEEEE <bow pull> <piano> <boink> Ah, where was I again? cute, it was like hello kitty cute.
Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	21-Jul-03/5:08 PM
Your understanding of your own history as a Jew Mr. Pig is vague, tainted in fear and sensitivity and onesidedly weak and colorless. All people have a right to live, not just the jews. Your comment above makes you no better than hitler, just another uninformed fanatic and personally a waste of my knowledge and my time. Why don't you go read up on your history a little bit more then get back with me, because, it's worse than your haikus. Your jewish filter, is doing what most people hate jews for, it's taking 'them' (anyone who's not jewish) out of the equation and centering on you and your people. There were more than just jews in those camps. there were italians, greeks, poles, hungarians, russians, gypsys, anyone that didn't fit the nazi's bill... So tell me pig? What color were their stars? Check Mate, mate. Enjoy your trip, you deserve it, god knows your poor people have just gotten a bum deal, I'm sure everyone owes you and yours' a never ending appology. After wwII and every German boy between the ages of ten and twenty was dead, and the jews were dead and the japs were fucking NUKED! NUKED! god and they whine about that alot huh? do you think it was the German people's fault? What the fuck is wrong with you? Are you that fucking Jewish? You make me sick man, just disgusting, you didn't learn a fucking thing from either side.
Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	22-Jul-03/2:37 PM
3) I live in A Jewish neighborhood, i am my next door neighbors shabbas goy, I am not jewish, but all of my dearest friend are, and my mentor is David Weismen. My agent Robert Abrahms (jew) my manager didi binder (jew), but was that my point? That I have something against Jews? I don't, but I'm not afraid to tell them what I think either, it doesn't mean I'm a nazi. I believe both sides were wrong, and also that America and some others put these balls in motion with the treaty of Versailles. Aryans are not racists, their name was stolen and used inappropriately, once again they were a peaceful steppe people 5,000 years ago, but when you take a moron and give him an occult book he can't understand? Weird shit can happen. My pathetic defense of History is not pathetic, or a defense, I just enjoy pushing stereotypes until they break. I am taoist by heart and feel that hating any team that your favourite team is playing? Is an unevolving 360 degree trap. We should not blame the German people, or Hitler, or Nazis. We should blame our own inability to maintain a grasp on reality when we win the lottery, or are informed we are dying. But some can't maintain, they snap, go out and kill their coworkers. Or (in the case of winning) spend the money on ridiculous shit until broke or dead for a life of what ifs. It's your classic example of a child seeing how far they can push a parent until no. Hitler was a psychotic just begging for attention and to be told no. If it wasn't the Jews it would have been someone else. When a psychopath is surrounded by enablers, money, fear, and people waiting on every word they utter. They become a time bomb, and when they get that first taste of superstar applause? Look out! 4) I am not conceited, I'm just more aware than your normal Joe, and I wouldn't torture anything, being a survivor of torture myself. To become that would be my worst nightmare. i am debating the fact that your poem doesn't include anyone else but the Jews and the Nazis black and white, if you would of had an italian girl singing to cheer them up before dying, or a gypsy still hustling incarcerated it would have been contrasted and brought humor and hope to an impossible situation, and show your audience that you're not just writing this because everyone will give it tens out of guilt.
Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	22-Jul-03/2:41 PM
5) "Maybe you are a jew because I say you are ! you see its childish to label people isn't it?" What? If a person's jewish and proud of it, and I say "hey there goes a jew" am i labeling them? Hardly, I think that's called stating the obvious. I am not a nazi or a Jew, I do write from their perspectives occasionally to inform people that. A Jew thinks anyone that is not Jewish is an infidel, lesser than, not the choosen people. A Nazi, is just a nihilist in uniform with an agenda that they think is worth dying for, if not worth killing people for, and they also think that they are 'special' and chosen. Now tell me, if that aint a match made in heaven, what is? I find it a waste of time all together to join any group that revolves around seperatism 6)Since you're not a Jew, you are doing just what I do, imagining, except how can you be so good at describing your blooding and such, but toss it on this one? My poem niggerhole has nothing to do with the Black race. Nor does the word nigger look it up. That poem was about Humanists going off (satanists) because I think it's funny what people will buy into to belong. Your comment above is very Hitlerish, by the way, though you are not, because it's psychotic and all over the place. i never said your haikus were not good they're just always syllablicly off, and since your one of the best list favourites. i was wondering if you were going to get good at counting eventually. Communicating about a subject like this is healthy, not taking things too far. And I think about everything I say, especially when 30 million souls died for this horseshit. Am I a god? Yes, we are all the image of god, and capable of infinitely more than finger pointing and slavery or racism or murder.
Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	22-Jul-03/2:42 PM
7) I do not know everything, but all people are born with the subconscious ability to feel what's right or wrong. Besides knowing everything would suck because i'm already over informed, and my intuition is so keen that I guess right 90% of the time, it ruins movies, relationships and boardgames, but all that comes back to comprehension levels, memory recapitulation, and reading while grounded or incarcerated. Oh, and genetics ZEIG HEIL! lol.
Re: Yellow Star by Mr Pig	22-Jul-03/2:45 PM
You would be a crappy lawyer, relax. Let's answer some of your observations shall we. 1) I think I am Horus8, a magic name I chose for special reasons some might unriddle when I'm dead. 2) I did not think your poem was bad. You are a good writer it would be hard for you to write something bad. I said that to the normal poet it would be confusing because of the language, place, and terms you used both metaphorically and up front. Because, it's a muddy surface. You follow what all of our text books taught us perfectly and there's nothing new or different about your observations, and poets are experts at putting a newlight or twist on an old dance, but you didn't. i'm surprised there wasn't a lampshade, or a delousing, or a train car with eyes and hands. Your approach and mood is also very rigid and bias. Good writers use research and undiscovered angles and data to their advantage, you didn't. Sometimes the best way to define pain and suffering immeasurable. Is to contrast it like in that movie "Life is beautiful" or my favourite Lina Wertmuller's "Seven Beautys" where this Italian ladys man gets thrown in a concentration camp, and what ensues is just a perfect example of what my point to you is.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/5:46 PM
Sodomy is the precurser of AIDS. Good luck, and god's speed.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/8:26 PM
Dill.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/8:30 PM
Ah yes, my sister, does the poetry boogie. What a writer you are sis. What a truly divine force of communication god has given you. I love you. You're the greatest.
Re: Spider by DreamerSupreme	22-Jul-03/8:36 PM
"Crossed arms, standing over the hallway The angel cries, all it has tried to make me see..To save me, Failed". Yes, very good. Find your subjects and explore them intigrating yourself, so it becomes organic and not self absorbed. I would suggest strengthening your vocabulary and grammar next, but you got the right idea. writing every day on poemranker will teach you that. 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/8:41 PM
A good poem, great at the start and middle, weakens at the end.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/8:44 PM
The end almost tosses it, i'd end at accident. Still a fanfuckingtastic poem. Really creative and brazen.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-03/8:46 PM
Wonderful
Re: education by richa	22-Jul-03/8:51 PM
Superb, compressed, poignant.
Re: A Delicate Poem by EAger to Offend	22-Jul-03/9:00 PM
Bountiful yet lean.
Re: Halves by impert&ent	22-Jul-03/9:02 PM
Decent, and powerful.