| Re: How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer |
21-Aug-03/11:20 AM |
It was good up to the point where you had to deliver the 'message'. Then it was a yawn.
Here are two facts.
1. A man with three kids never hops out of a toyota,
he slowly slides.
2. A man that dreams of murder? Does not love or stay with a cheating whore. He moves on to his dreams, and better things... Like MURDERING.
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| Re: faulty fate by Nirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/11:30 AM |
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Sounds like you need to condense this into a fortune cookie and sit on it for another ten weeks.
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| Re: super-power by Nirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/11:35 AM |
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Maybe they read this poem and were stupifed.
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| Re: Blind Sight by Nirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/11:38 AM |
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| Re: You and I by Nirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/11:47 AM |
Sometimes, I think back on when I lost it all, again, for the 100th time, and I laugh hysterically until I pop out from behind it all, and say "surprise" with a mindset for murder.
Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.
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21-Aug-03/11:55 AM |
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"Boys bare flesh is what I obsess" That alone is worth an eight. So are you saying that you are suffering from Pete Townsendnitis of the sphincter or Kunt?
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| Re: quarter-step (abridged) by richa |
21-Aug-03/11:59 AM |
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You are old, but hey, I'd fuck you.
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21-Aug-03/1:13 PM |
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Tricky Mother fucker, oh, and crackers.
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| Re: Love till you hate by NNirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/1:23 PM |
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That's tempting my devil fork.
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| Re: walk out by NNirvana13666 |
21-Aug-03/1:25 PM |
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I would end at controlling, and work on shaping your structures.
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| Re: To Mom by Brittanyy |
21-Aug-03/2:17 PM |
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| Re: Forget it...k? by psikosis |
21-Aug-03/2:58 PM |
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Could you talk more about the opening of legs?
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22-Aug-03/11:04 AM |
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22-Aug-03/1:28 PM |
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See this is exactly why Joan of Ark, failed miserably. Thank god I didn't leave my galoshes at home. It got deep in here for a moment. I, however, hope you did not over exsert yourself selecting words with appropriate connotations.
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22-Aug-03/1:38 PM |
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GQT awarde. Wow that was really fucking good. When I got to Mothra I was dying, for sure LOMG! 1.
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| Re: Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus |
22-Aug-03/1:39 PM |
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A really brave attempt. I could edit this.
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| Re: Enantiodromia by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/3:53 PM |
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Bone hiss rocks. Superb poetry.
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| Re: What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/3:55 PM |
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Hilarious, as funny as birdman's hero poem easilly.
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| Re: Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss |
22-Aug-03/3:57 PM |
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| Re: The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz |
22-Aug-03/4:03 PM |
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Feeling okay? Today I auditioned in speedos and when I bent over my hernia popped up my hemhoroid popped over and a baby mouse cried.
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