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2-Oct-03/8:12 AM |
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A splendid poem, but the line breaks and lower case crap simply doesn't work here.
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| Re: Battered moon by revy13 |
2-Oct-03/10:49 AM |
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hmmm. how does one actually figure out whether or not the moon has been battered? Doust it cry. Doust it shimmy? Perhaps... it sends you an e-mail saying "help me I'm a battered in the pants of some highschooler on a bus staring at you right now with a brown eye!"?. That's it battered moons don't have black I's they have brown I's. lol. between me and you? your title is fucking seriously pathetic on a huge scale. An avalanche, if you will, of retardation. Kitsch to the max!
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| Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
2-Oct-03/2:04 PM |
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My favourite part is when you say Collages. urp.
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| Re: clandestine momentum by skaskowski |
2-Oct-03/5:16 PM |
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In what country is this a Sonnet in?
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2-Oct-03/6:57 PM |
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| Re: angst by nentwined |
2-Oct-03/11:39 PM |
"or my poetry might get worse" would work much better. Otherwise, one demerit, therefore, a 9.
Quite funny, but stolen from muah.
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4-Oct-03/9:04 PM |
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| Re: A Distracting Fistful of Haiku by HaikuMofo |
4-Oct-03/9:30 PM |
"West of Switzerland" would work better
1,2,6,and7 are the shiz.
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| Re: Hard To Tell by New Life Drug |
4-Oct-03/9:32 PM |
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From that perspective? I bet.
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| Re: Painted Air by New Life Drug |
4-Oct-03/9:33 PM |
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Improves dramatically towards the end, but starts beached whale. 7.
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| Re: such a horrible thing to waste by Freethinker1602 |
6-Oct-03/1:31 AM |
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6-Oct-03/1:40 AM |
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Ha ha ha, Okey dokey, that was some silly shit there. Like the time my left foot exploded and seriously wounded a clown red nose.
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6-Oct-03/1:49 AM |
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Could use another edit, but who couldn't? I'm just saying that because your work is worth it, and always either perfect or damn near. 9.
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6-Oct-03/3:43 AM |
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7-Oct-03/4:40 PM |
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Siberian Gulag, obviously.
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| Re: Shoe Hole by Bobjim |
7-Oct-03/4:44 PM |
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hulahoop would've worked better.
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7-Oct-03/4:45 PM |
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| Re: Orchidess by abecedarian |
7-Oct-03/6:06 PM |
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There's a great poem in there somewhere That's for sure.
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8-Oct-03/2:42 PM |
Posibly the best thing I've read in a week
TODAY! JOE-JOE HAS WON THE ESTEAMED AND MOST ADMONISHABLE GOLDEN QUE-TIP AWARDE.
CONGRATULATIONS FEW HAVE DARED TRY. FEW HAVE RECIEVED. CLEAN YOUR EARS WELL JOE-JOE, CLEAN YOUR EARS WELL MY SWEET LITTLE MAN.
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| Re: Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Oct-03/2:48 PM |
SHIT!!!!!!!!
This win's the first ever HORUSIAN PARODY AWARD! or the HPA (hispictos pubiescent accrusion) The first ever! That was fucking hilarious. I'm serious I was just smoking a joint and reading this and fucking rocking back and forth with a cackle cracking garulous verve emmiting from-a hole in my face. 10!
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