Re: Fire by Pervy Elf	26-Dec-03/2:17 PM
I once knew this girl that wanted me to stick my foot in her vagina,and I did, but I could never look at her without laughing again, so that kind of sucked.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Dec-03/1:07 PM
outstanding work here.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Dec-03/1:50 PM
I love you, you should call more.
Re: Rape by titan69	3-Jan-04/1:30 AM
Yeah, well... It parallels the writing.
Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT	3-Jan-04/1:32 AM
Have you ever got a zit in your ear?!!!!!! It's fucking murder.
Re: Snowboarding, Sierra Nevada, 12/31/03 by Plaidypus	3-Jan-04/3:42 AM
how you endowed angels and demons into this poem is why you are hopeless.
Re: My Castle by Cougarchic	9-Jan-04/12:51 PM
A steaming turd just bristling with activity.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jan-04/12:54 PM
Could you perhaps tear the windows and shatter the cloth so as not to be so excruciatingly boring next time? God, you would think you'd get sick of the cliche for a while and grow some balls of originality.
Re: Runaway by Cougarchic	9-Jan-04/12:57 PM
So your saying don't run away? Jog in? walk within? Do the homeless have a harmonica or a quartet around a burn barrel?
Re: Ode to the Wolf by Cougarchic	9-Jan-04/1:01 PM
I like how you used slyly and sly in the same poem with a fox to describe a wolf? Pumagirl!!! yay for you! This is hardly an ode? there's no indians, no game tax, no wolf boots? what kind of poet are you? This is a chode to lemurs if anything.
Re: Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:10 AM
I must agree with everyone. this sets new perimeters to cliche poetry, and very well could be the secret missing formula. But the line "sweet snacks of out get together". made me laugh and itch ring worm.
Re: Malaysia by Crakyamuni	10-Jan-04/6:46 PM
Jesus, your end chucks it? It was great until the last two lines? Do I have to teach you how to end a poem?
Re: American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer	12-Jan-04/12:30 PM
Canonic... sweit.
Re: New commandments by little_big_nose	12-Jan-04/12:43 PM
There once was a twisted poof wizard that had the poetical skills of a lizard that had died on the road humping a horny toad With a leaky chode set to explode.
Re: She Said by TheWhiteLion777	12-Jan-04/9:40 PM
That was a fine impression of a six headed wombat, but I was looking for an lemon lemur in pine scent?
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jan-04/1:42 PM
I'd drop the last line entirely, but you know me.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Jan-04/1:51 PM
Maybe then? You should stop being so queer.
Re: Dry Beast Night by fevriere	14-Jan-04/1:54 PM
Good, but irk? My ownly complaint would be a touch muddled, but highly imaginative. Structure was flawless, bravo.
Re: Up. by fevriere	14-Jan-04/4:11 PM
Liked it.
Re: Liberty! by fevriere	17-Jan-04/12:15 PM
Is it shaped like concrete?