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She Said (Free verse) by TheWhiteLion777
She said you’re handsome and smart Before she tore out my heart I don’t need your lion-hearted love anymore I got my anger to keep me from being lonely You think I can’t survive with out you, So watch me thrive on ceaseless fury You’ll leave me in a hurry now Or you’ll leave buried in my anger You’ve dragged me down into the murk Now I drug your wine with my hate for you I’ll kill you with words of calm destruction Leave before I do something I regret Just leave before I get upset Run, or I’ll pursue you to the end of this liaison Get away from my endless torment Before your passion for life laments Don’t become a victim of my apologetic vexing Never be oppressed by the stress of me For the strain I inflict will kill us both…

Down the ladder: Cycles In Circles - Shame

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10383
Posted: January 12, 2004 7:38 PM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2004 7:38 PM PST
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[4] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 12-Jan-04/9:40 PM | Reply
That was a fine impression of a six headed wombat, but I was looking for an lemon lemur in pine scent?
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