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She Said (Free verse) by TheWhiteLion777
She said youâre handsome and smart
Before she tore out my heart
I donât need your lion-hearted love anymore
I got my anger to keep me from being lonely
You think I canât survive with out you,
So watch me thrive on ceaseless fury
Youâll leave me in a hurry now
Or youâll leave buried in my anger
Youâve dragged me down into the murk
Now I drug your wine with my hate for you
Iâll kill you with words of calm destruction
Leave before I do something I regret
Just leave before I get upset
Run, or Iâll pursue you to the end of this liaison
Get away from my endless torment
Before your passion for life laments
Donât become a victim of my apologetic vexing
Never be oppressed by the stress of me
For the strain I inflict will kill us bothâ¦
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10383
Posted: January 12, 2004 7:38 PM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2004 7:38 PM PST
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