Re: Confusion of Illusion by DreamMachine	22-Oct-02/8:08 PM
true, but not 'devil may cry', cuz that's the bomb diggity..your poem though. unfortunately, just aint.
Re: Daniela by little_angel_maria	22-Oct-02/8:10 PM
i tried to complain about this poem, but the complain button doesn't work..so ...i'm just gonna fart and palm waift the smell up towards my face, and read it again..slower this time. 10!
Re: "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus	22-Oct-02/8:14 PM
not only is all of that true, but he also isn't english, he's english black and adopted, and he has aids on his knee cap...and a crush on woody harrelson. so there. loser, white trash bigot. booger eater, james joyce avid reader...cauliflower eared stool roller. die DIE!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Oct-02/8:16 PM
this once. don't let it happen again, our you shant recieve the mushroom hatted oracle push up the same. got it. get it. good. 7.
Re: Love by little_angel_maria	22-Oct-02/8:21 PM
this is priceless. 10. make love to my pickle swelled "lap snorkel"...could ya quick before..i really just find out your a litte fat gay jew from idaho...are there even any jews in idaho? priceless. 10! P.s together darling with my votes and counsel you take out babbit and god's wife from the best list...forever! whoooahhh..ah..ah. (pinkied cornered mouth) 10!10!
Re: "turd to yo mutha" daywalker shittalker by Bachus	22-Oct-02/8:22 PM
okay. you can stop popping up now,
Re: Ode to my childhood by nopal	22-Oct-02/8:26 PM
guess what. i know...it's okay that your beak is small..there..there..hold my hand.RIPPPPPPPPPP! sorry..about your arm. here..i'll give it back..BY BEATING YOUR LITTLE NUTS WITH IT..BACK! BACK! I SAY...please..please..mr. gen y guy. grow and change for me..and for timmy..and little bobby? 2.
Re: Parallel by aperfecttool77	22-Oct-02/10:43 PM
you have no grasp of the haiku. it can be out of the 575 and less than and rearranged. and as for your lyric well...it's not..you fail. purposely, i would hope. and quite poorly. congratulations!
Re: Something in the way by nopal	22-Oct-02/10:58 PM
this is like rattle snake colonic.have no fear...none1 because your heart was a rubber chicken and his incredibly unharmed. wink, sink.
Re: Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Oct-02/1:19 PM
the movie don juan with brando and depp gives a great definition of love,,try that
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Oct-02/1:20 PM
nicely put non fiction. 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Oct-02/1:21 PM
maybe change title to 'not about me'?
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Oct-02/1:23 PM
brave and insightful. thanks. you really know how to wake me up. i have to shave now, and pretend some more later. 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-02/7:50 AM
the fact that this vile distraction could even pull off a ten is proof enough that i've never come down off of that bad acid trip in 93. 0.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-02/8:06 AM
i really have to say that you've out done yourself with this one..it's quite..well..interesting and a huge bitch slap.i just hope not because your beyond it all, but because you care just that much. lol! anyhow these were my favorite lines, "10 cocks all at once, and"riding the prison bus on a calm autumn day". figures huh? be well. 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Oct-02/8:12 AM
yeah. andtheir billboards around town for this seasons show look as if they were painted by goergia o keef's dwarf/chauffer/errand boy while he was suspended upside down fro a bicycle powered helicopter. nevermind. what the fuck am i even doing up right now? especially rambling about shit that is that monumentally pointless. fascinating. last line is killer filler. carry on.7.
Re: PHandAcid by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/8:16 AM
bravo, but can you play twister nude with an eloctronic waffle iron. 9. carry on. i enjoyed your word misplacement quite a bit and the title hook in also.
Re: Pismo shack by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/8:26 AM
i would end it with, "the strangers part ways" but make it "the strangers ways part". very good though. i love pismo beach and went there once with my first girlfriend laura padilla and her stepfather and mother from bakersfield in a light blue dodge omni...we watched a greatwhite shark eating seals one afternon, while the sunset. we set. ironically we parted ways. sorry about te homeless bastard...he's probably better off..cable is expensive..these days.10.
Re: wax by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/8:30 AM
lose the last line, cuz nobody really gives a fuck. unfortunately...plus it draws more interest thatta way otay. otay. 6.
Re: Drinker's Haiku by cacophony	26-Oct-02/8:33 AM
red also tends to get you good and smashed were you wake up with crapped pants and linoleum snoring..dreaming of marin county and boba fet. 6.