poemranker ::Confusion of Illusion by DreamMachine

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Confusion of Illusion

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

Dreams are the source of my pain, I feel as if i'm just playing another damn videogame, A world within it's own self, The graphics change, The surroundings suck, I hate this dumb game, But I can't get enough, Its just another prison for my own mind, A head game to set me up for a fall, And I dive plummeting to my death, Hiding from all, This is my confusing thats killing me now, But when I awake from my own dream, Maybe i'll know it's just an illusion somehow

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[0] horus8 22-Oct-02/8:08 PM Reply
true, but not 'devil may cry', cuz that's the bomb diggity..your poem though. unfortunately, just aint.
[n/a] razorgrin 23-Oct-02/7:01 AM Reply
'devil may cry' is a thoroughly sweet game.