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Confusion of Illusion (Free verse) by DreamMachine
Dreams are the source of my pain, I feel as if i'm just playing another damn videogame, A world within it's own self, The graphics change, The surroundings suck, I hate this dumb game, But I can't get enough, Its just another prison for my own mind, A head game to set me up for a fall, And I dive plummeting to my death, Hiding from all, This is my confusing thats killing me now, But when I awake from my own dream, Maybe i'll know it's just an illusion somehow

Up the ladder: Silly Get
Down the ladder: angel

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.8333334
Weighted score: 4.148352
Overall Rank: 13275
Posted: October 2, 2002 5:28 PM PDT; Last modified: October 2, 2002 5:28 PM PDT
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[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Oct-02/8:08 PM | Reply
true, but not 'devil may cry', cuz that's the bomb diggity..your poem though. unfortunately, just aint.
[n/a] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.121 | 23-Oct-02/7:01 AM | Reply
'devil may cry' is a thoroughly sweet game.
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