angel

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

Oh little girl, grab my little hand, don't be scared, I'll help you, It's ok you are safe, we're going to a better place. Where no one discriminates you for your race. It'll be much better there oh yes it will! Oh little girl, look at the white fountain up above, look at the purple pony playing with the little boy. Oh little girl don't be scared, I'm an angel, don't worry your mommy and daddy will be safe. Oh little girl, take my hand you'll be safe. I'll take you to god, it'll be ok, I'll take you where peace lies beneath and no war will there be. It'll be ok trust me, I'm an angel sent from god to show you the way, here take my hand, I'll look after you, Don't you worry little girl I'm here for you

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[2] Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/10:10 AM Reply

These works of yours really would read much better as songs than as poems, somehow.

[n/a] little_angel_maria › Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/10:12 AM Reply

OMG!!! ok whatever thanks by the way forst compliment i get from you

[0] razorgrin 22-Oct-02/11:39 AM Reply

to be with the angels you must die first...here..take my knife...

[n/a] little_angel_maria › razorgrin 27-Oct-02/12:03 PM Reply

jajaja im laughing