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angel (Free verse) by little_angel_maria
Oh little girl, grab my little hand, don't be scared, I'll help you, It's ok you are safe, we're going to a better place. Where no one discriminates you for your race. It'll be much better there oh yes it will! Oh little girl, look at the white fountain up above, look at the purple pony playing with the little boy. Oh little girl don't be scared, I'm an angel, don't worry your mommy and daddy will be safe. Oh little girl, take my hand you'll be safe. I'll take you to god, it'll be ok, I'll take you where peace lies beneath and no war will there be. It'll be ok trust me, I'm an angel sent from god to show you the way, here take my hand, I'll look after you, Don't you worry little girl I'm here for you

Up the ladder: Confusion of Illusion
Down the ladder: Kentucky Fried Fun

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.8333334
Weighted score: 4.148352
Overall Rank: 13276
Posted: October 21, 2002 10:08 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2002 10:08 AM PDT
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Comments:
[2] Tintagiles @ 207.179.137.231 | 21-Oct-02/10:10 AM | Reply
These works of yours really would read much better as songs than as poems, somehow.
[n/a] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.160.11 > Tintagiles | 21-Oct-02/10:12 AM | Reply
OMG!!! ok whatever thanks by the way forst compliment i get from you
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.14 | 22-Oct-02/11:39 AM | Reply
to be with the angels you must die first...here..take my knife...
[n/a] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.79.35 > razorgrin | 27-Oct-02/12:03 PM | Reply
jajaja im laughing
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