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angel (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

Oh little girl, grab my little hand, don't be scared, I'll help you, It's ok you are safe, we're going to a better place. Where no one discriminates you for your race. It'll be much better there oh yes it will! Oh little girl, look at the white fountain up above, look at the purple pony playing with the little boy. Oh little girl don't be scared, I'm an angel, don't worry your mommy and daddy will be safe. Oh little girl, take my hand you'll be safe. I'll take you to god, it'll be ok, I'll take you where peace lies beneath and no war will there be. It'll be ok trust me, I'm an angel sent from god to show you the way, here take my hand, I'll look after you, Don't you worry little girl I'm here for you

Tintagiles 21-Oct-02/10:10 AM
These works of yours really would read much better as songs than as poems, somehow.




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